Some people think that the teenage years are the happiest times of the most people's lives others think that adult life brings more happiness in spite of greater responsibilities
One of the most conspicuous trends of today's world is finding happiness, pleasure, and reliefs, so, there is a debate of age factor. Some people assert that teenagers are happier as they are independent of financial worry, on the contrary, many people believe that adult people enjoy different colors of life and are more satisfied. As such, there are both merits and demerits to this trend, although I am of the opinion that the former outdo the latter.
There are a myriad of benefits that can be attributed to happiness in juvenile age. The most preponderant one is that children don't have to worry about financial resources as they are fully dependent on their guardians. Not only this relief helps a teenage to fully concentrate on study, but they also prosper well; worrying little about availability of things. Consequently, they can enjoy every moment of life with more confidence. It hardly needs to mention that all these merits stand a child in good stead, as far as making the time happiest one by enjoying a burden-free life.
There are, however, some pitfalls that can easily overwhelm the benefits of the childhood phase. The primary one stems from the fact that an adult can live independently and enjoy all luxuries of life on his own. As it is a beautiful phase of life because job, marriage and career development mainly happen which ultimately brings colors to a person's life. Besides, there may be some fundamental responsibilities but a mature person can easily sustain these issues. Hence it is evident why many people are in favor of predicting happiness in the adult phase.
In view of the arguments outlined above, one can conclude that the benefits of adulthood time period in terms of happiness are too great to ignore. Nevertheless, the potential drawbacks of responsibilities should be overlooked either.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, hence, however, if, look, may, nevertheless, so, well, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 43.0788530466 53% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1543.0 1977.66487455 78% => OK
No of words: 307.0 407.700716846 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02605863192 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79347440321 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.57003257329 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 498.6 618.680645161 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.1763197951 48.9658058833 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.866666667 100.406767564 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4666666667 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.93333333333 5.45110844103 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236716290988 0.236089414692 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.068461417533 0.076458572812 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0644595544928 0.0737576698707 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130986787618 0.150856017488 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0525617823702 0.0645574589148 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 11.7677419355 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 86.8835125448 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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