The learning process is a very important matter since it is the way to develop knowledge and improve yourself. In this sense, there is people that thinks that teachers are essential in this process while other persons states that it's better to learn things without the help from teachers. Personally, I understand that its's much better to learn things with the help of a teacher because it's possible to have guidance and it's a better way to overcome difficult obstacles in a field.
One might argue that have help from a teacher is not useful and that it's much better to learn things alone. In general, people that supports this idea believes that when we really want to learn something, we can put a lot of effort to understand the subject by ourselves and then absorb that knowledge. If a person wants to learn how to play a guitar, for instance, he will be able to learn how to play it by himself if there is effort and commitment to do this, otherwise he will not struggle to learn it. In this context, to study and learn things without a professional help is a way to demonstrate discipline and commitment with the learning process.
While this perspective might have some fair arguments, it's reckless to try to learn things without the help of a teacher. Using the same example of the person who wants to learn how to play guitar, we can say that it would be very difficult to understand the basic instructions on how to read a tab from a music without any guidance. Probably the learning process will be slower and boring. Moreover, the person will have difficult on how to handle the guitar, since he never had this experience before. Do you know what happens in these kind of moments? Probably this learner would take a look on Youtube and search for introductory lessons of guitar, which means this person will look for a teacher's help in order to learn better the basic concepts on how to play this instrument.
In this sense, it's much better for the learning process to have a professional guidance even if we only know the teacher from Youtube or others online platforms. With the correct guidance it's possible to learn the basic concepts about a subject we have interest. Also, a teacher can help to overcome obstacles the learner aren't able to beat by himself. It's very frustrating to not learn something within a certain field and at the same time don't have any assistance that can offer some help. In these situations many people might want to give up and teachers are very important to help people to overcome that barrier and to keep the interest about learning.
In conclusion, one can say that it's much better to the learning process to have the help of a teacher. A teacher is very useful to help us in advance our learning and to keep motivating us to improve our knowledge.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...cause its possible to have guidance and its a better way to overcome difficult obst...
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Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ercome difficult obstacles in a field. One might argue that have help from a te...
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Line 5, column 533, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
...nce before. Do you know what happens in these kind of moments? Probably this learner would...
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Line 5, column 726, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to better', 'to well'
Suggestion: to better; to well
...k for a teachers help in order to learn better the basic concepts on how to play this ...
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Line 7, column 323, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: aren't
... help to overcome obstacles the learner arent able to beat by himself. Its very frust...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...in a certain field and at the same time dont have any assistance that can offer some...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, moreover, really, so, then, while, for instance, in conclusion, in general, kind of, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 57.0 43.0788530466 132% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 83.0 52.1666666667 159% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2310.0 1977.66487455 117% => OK
No of words: 500.0 407.700716846 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.72870804502 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50484650228 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.382 0.524837075471 73% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 703.8 618.680645161 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.7394209858 48.9658058833 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.5 100.406767564 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.6045352989 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.45 5.45110844103 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268094157595 0.236089414692 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100368885638 0.076458572812 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0570451778744 0.0737576698707 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184688113896 0.150856017488 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0288468871002 0.0645574589148 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 11.7677419355 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.18 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 86.8835125448 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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