Some people like to travel with a companion. Other people prefer to travel alone. What do you prefer?
Nowadays travelling is becoming more and more popular. Solitary travel is preferable for some people, others could not imagine their journey without a partner or a friend.
As for me, I like travelling with my friends because it is cost-effective due to the fact that all expenses are shared between us. Moreover, you always have someone, with whom you might discuss anything you want, thus it is very convenient for a person who is afraid to be alone, to meet new people or who may not speak a foreign language well. For example, I have difficulties in communication with someone I did not know before, that is why I always take along a friend of mine. In addition, if it is an extreme situation, something terrible has happened, you might trust friends who help you and solve your problem. Besides, I could help mentioning that travelling with a companion generally is gay and memorable, and these memories of the journey might warm your soul during your life.
On the other hand, travelling solo has some advantages. Firstly, you do not have to conform to friends needs, which gives you a possibility to have much more spare time and a free timetable. What is more, one will be less nervous and stressed due to associated problems, thus, it is opportune for a person who want to have a rest from friends and to keep his mind free. For instance, my friend Alex is such a person who uses a journey as a possibility to be alone. Therefore, travelling alone gives you more chances to meet new people and maybe to find your love than if you travel with someone, and, of course, it is a perfect chance to travel in order to improve a foreign language.
In conclusion, I would like to say that a choice whether to travel alone or not depends on your final goals: to have a rest from friends and to keep your mind free or to save money and have a perfect journey
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Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to mention' or 'mention'.
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Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'friend'.
Suggestion: friend
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, as for, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, of course, what is more, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1532.0 1977.66487455 77% => OK
No of words: 337.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.54599406528 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57944587443 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.519287833828 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 485.1 618.680645161 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.4973935673 48.9658058833 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.846153846 100.406767564 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.9230769231 20.6045352989 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.5384615385 5.45110844103 248% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.315951712145 0.236089414692 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110187608776 0.076458572812 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0751862188495 0.0737576698707 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18214620101 0.150856017488 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0685692608182 0.0645574589148 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.41 10.9000537634 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 86.8835125448 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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