Some people trust their first impressions about a person’s character because they believe these judgments are generally correct. Other people do not judge a person’s character quickly because they believe first impressions are often wrong. Compare these two attitudes. Which attitude do you agree with? Support your choice with specific examples.
Every day we meet many people. We make pre-judgement on them. These judgements can be true or false. It’s really difficult to identify people at first meeting. Personally, I believe that people do not judge a person’s character quickly. I feel this way for several reasons, which I will explain in following essay.
First of all, Person character can judge upon their think, behavior but it also depends on situations. At what situation you meet to that person. This behavior is the result of some emotions' developing. There are a lot of things which stimulate some emotions on a person at some moments to be happy, angry, sad, excited, or boring. But the person cannot be in those situations all the time. For example, I was in 10th Standard class and new girl joined to our class. I raised my hand for friendship, but she didn’t respond to me in proper way. After few days, she came to my desk and she said first day of school she was missing her old school friends and she apologies me. After that we became good friends, and it has been almost 10 years of our friendship.
Secondly, person’s character is identified after you became a friend. It’s very difficult to trust on anyone in first meeting. Some people try to give wrong impression at first time. For instance, For marriage purpose. Couples try to give good impression about themselves. Women try to pretend she is very polite, very kind and very sweet and man try to pretend he is very intelligent, smart, hard working. I think you get to know each other after meeting several of time.
Finally, to judge any person’s character It is important to know that people personally. Otherwise in first meeting can make false assumption regarding men/women.
In conclusion, I am of the opinion we cannot judge person’s character quickly because many people try to give wrong impression at first time, and it’s depends at what situation you meet to that person. I believe that we can identify person’s character after a friendship. It is essential to think in and understand other person’s perspective as well, in order to understand others perspective we should not act impetuously based on the first impressions.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 90, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Otherwise,
...portant to know that people personally. Otherwise in first meeting can make false assumpt...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, really, regarding, second, secondly, so, well, for example, for instance, i feel, i think, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 52.0 43.0788530466 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1830.0 1977.66487455 93% => OK
No of words: 374.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89304812834 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3976220399 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72000184197 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.508021390374 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 547.2 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.4146039503 48.9658058833 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.7777777778 100.406767564 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.8518518519 20.6045352989 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.51851851852 5.45110844103 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.88709677419 246% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.315745640917 0.236089414692 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0863322078083 0.076458572812 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0941340533607 0.0737576698707 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189146433258 0.150856017488 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0650452662601 0.0645574589148 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 11.7677419355 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.49 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.03 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 86.8835125448 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 10.002688172 45% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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