There are some ways for college students that how to study more efficient. And some college students put more effort on their studding to pass their exams successfully. And some of them prefer to study alone. In my opinion studying in a group is better for three main reasons.
The first reason is that college courses are difficult to understand. Being in a group could provide an opportunity to understand difficult problems because the range of the knowledge of a group is more than a knowledge of a person when he studies alone. They have a chance to argue with each other to understand the difficult concepts of that course.
The second reason is that they could have complete resources to study for preparing for an exam. There may be some sessions which student does not attend to a class and other members of group can teach that student before an exam and the sources of an exam are better than sources of an individual who is studying alone.
The third reason is that they can feel more relax before an exam. Some students have a lot of stress about upcoming exam. And they do not know how to deal with that pressure, and that stress decreases when they are in a group because as I mentioned in the first and second reason they can eliminate their defects before an exam and eliminating defects causes students to be relax about the exam.
To sum up, studying in a group is better than studying alone. And students can have a better understanding about the difficult parts. And they have complete sources of exam. And they can be more relax before an exam.
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Essay evaluation report
can feel more relax before an exam
can feel more relaxing before an exam
about upcoming exam.
about an upcoming exam.
And they can be more relax before an exam.
And they can be more relaxing before an exam.
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flaws:
1. No. of Words: 281 350 //try to put more content. 350 words will be ideal
2. you have a lot of sentences starting with pronouns like 'they', try to use remove this style and start the subjects with other nouns.
3. No. of Different Words: 116 200 //need to improve vocabulary words
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 18 in 30
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 16 15
No. of Words: 281 350
No. of Characters: 1264 1500
No. of Different Words: 116 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.094 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.498 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.343 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 78 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 55 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 37 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 20 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 17.562 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 12.268 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.438 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.373 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.602 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.142 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...up is better for three main reasons. The first reason is that college courses...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... difficult concepts of that course. The second reason is that they could hav...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n individual who is studying alone. The third reason is that they can feel m...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... students to be relax about the exam. To sum up, studying in a group is b...
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Line 9, column 180, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...And they have complete sources of exam. And they can be more relax before an exam. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, may, second, so, third, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 43.0788530466 53% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.0752688172 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1300.0 1977.66487455 66% => OK
No of words: 281.0 407.700716846 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62633451957 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.48103885553 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38855526126 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 212.727598566 53% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.398576512456 0.524837075471 76% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 407.7 618.680645161 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.59856630824 10% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 7.0 1.86738351254 375% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 66.6911901509 48.9658058833 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.25 100.406767564 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5625 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.6875 5.45110844103 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23045442169 0.236089414692 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0991335139504 0.076458572812 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101772227483 0.0737576698707 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145232051037 0.150856017488 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0624330818668 0.0645574589148 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 11.7677419355 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 10.9000537634 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.73 8.01818996416 84% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 86.8835125448 46% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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