Some universities require students to take classes in many subjects. Other universities require students to specialize in one subject. Which is better?
No one can deny than learning is on of the most important concept which distinct humankind form the other. In fact, people have to appriciet this uniqe abillity and spend all their life to learn more and more. In connection, I believe that learning diverse of fields help people to have a great perspective of our world. Therby, I personally, perefer to concur with university require students to take classes in many subject. I feel this way for two main reasons, On which I will elaborate them in following paragraphs.
To begin with, Thanks to requiring student to take cources in several fields, students will gain awareness of what field or skill they can fit in. To be more spesific, students by trying and examin themselves in variaty of subject finally discover which one of the subjects will become their dream carrier. In addition, humankind have several inteligence in several fields wchich they have to be descover to be flurish at the end. Drawing to my own exprience, Upon reaching the age of 25, I passed many classes in diffrent fields and after examine among chemistry, arts, mathematics and computer science; I finally choosed computer science because it's the best fit for my personality and goals. On contrary, my friend choosed painting and went trough it and after many years he realized that his talent is in sports. Consequently, he wasted many years to found what he wants.
Secondly, If students have to take classes in deivers field instead of on subject, they will have many opportunity to find jobs. In contrast, they open many windows for their carrier because they have knowlage in several fields to campare the specialists. As a matter of fact, students by taking classes in vary subjects increase thier chance to finding job after garduation. my personal exprience is compelling illustraion of this. When my friend and I graduated from univrsity. I graduated from computer sience by I passed tons of classes in the other fields but my fiend just passed painting classes. We tried so hard and seeked out for job offers together, Some day, Suddenly, my resume accepted but my friends did not because of my knowlage in many fields.
As noted above, taking classes in many field not only, flureshing people talent in their main field, but also open many opportunities in finding job.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, finally, if, second, secondly, so, i feel, in addition, in contrast, in fact, as a matter of fact, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 69.0 52.1666666667 132% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1935.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 392.0 407.700716846 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9362244898 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44960558625 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6031197743 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548469387755 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 587.7 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.8606222799 48.9658058833 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.842105263 100.406767564 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6315789474 20.6045352989 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.21052631579 5.45110844103 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281873123693 0.236089414692 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0891515580672 0.076458572812 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.118018283153 0.0737576698707 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168887306781 0.150856017488 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0504569350359 0.0645574589148 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 11.7677419355 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 86.8835125448 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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