It is undeniable fact that myriad number of adolescents are eagerly waiting to step
outside home and live independent life. However, staying with family offers
safety, love, camaraderie and other welcome economic benefits.
In my view, young ones should live in the vicinity of family members for
the following reasons:
To begin with, living alone comes with obstacles and challenges such as
taking care of own house, buying groceries and other household chores. Not
only this, but to endure expenses of rent and other utilities. However,
young adults need to struggle hard to meet those expenses along with
college. On the other hand, all these hardships can be minimized by
residing with parents and other family members. For instance, one of my
friend was desperately wanted to stay in an apartment away from her parents.
She used to work around the clock to pay her monthly expenses and
jeaopardized her study and classes. Unfortunately, she regretted on her
decision and then she went back to stay with family again.
Indeed parents are responsible for fostering good moral qualities
and discipline in the young adults can not be replaced with anyone. In addition, they aid in decision making process for their offspring to provide prosper future. For instance, when I was
seventeen years old I was bewildered and unable to decide which field is better for me either science or commerce. Fortunately, my parents provided me with rational
for both options and supported me to choose right career field. As a result,
I joined physical therapy school and cleared with flying colors. Because
of wise suggestion of my parents I have a stable career. In contrary,
young adults living in solitude are deprived of these privileges and often times
they make futile decisions and waste their time and energy.
To recapitulate, there is nothing better than house surrounded by
family members. They not only provide materialistic benefits but also
other intangible gifts such as love, affection and support whenever needed.
After scrutinizing both sides of the prompt, advantages of staying with loved
ones outweigh that of living far from them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...es with obstacles and challenges such as taking care of own house, buying groceri...
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... all these hardships can be minimized by residing with parents and other family m...
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... family members. For instance, one of my friend was desperately wanted to stay in...
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...he clock to pay her monthly expenses and jeaopardized her study and classes. Unfo...
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...t back to stay with family again. Indeed parents are responsible for fostering g...
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...sible for fostering good moral qualities and discipline in the young adults can n...
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...prosper future. For instance, when I was seventeen years old I was bewildered and...
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...both options and supported me to choose right career field. As a result, I joined ph...
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... school and cleared with flying colors. Because of wise suggestion of my parents I ha...
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... and cleared with flying colors. Because of wise suggestion of my parents I have ...
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...nts I have a stable career. In contrary, young adults living in solitude are depr...
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... nothing better than house surrounded by family members. They not only provide ma...
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... provide materialistic benefits but also other intangible gifts such as love, aff...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, then, for instance, in addition, such as, as a result, in my view, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1853.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 349.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30945558739 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6119329199 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616045845272 0.524837075471 117% => OK
syllable_count: 570.6 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.1627755872 48.9658058833 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.5263157895 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3684210526 20.6045352989 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.68421052632 5.45110844103 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 28.0 4.53405017921 618% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 15.0 5.5376344086 271% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278231796891 0.236089414692 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0758061219383 0.076458572812 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0637237197379 0.0737576698707 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0632130942894 0.150856017488 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0592088991823 0.0645574589148 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 11.7677419355 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 10.9000537634 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.01818996416 112% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 86.8835125448 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.