Independent essay
Events happened in the past is one of the main factor responsible for existence of human beings on the earth.
Advancement in science and technology allows us to have knowledge of past. Although, some people think that
studying about ancient time is useless, but in my opinion it is exceptionally important for different fields for the following reasons:
Economically, we live in ever changing world, it is necessary to know about important discovery.
about contribution. To create latest complex machinery principle of resistance and and conductivity acts as pillar;
which were formulated in ancient times. So, it is compulsory for electronic engineers to knows pins and bolts of old formulae and concepts to derive appropriate methods. However, astronomers are keen in gathering information about the past to know process how earth came into existence. They have collected data from the research done to understand big band theory is the model which explains the phenomenon of expansion of universe from high density and high temprature states and changes happened at the that time.
So old studies teaches the evolution of earth.
Academically, when we analyse our formal education system; history is mandatory subject
in schools everywhere. Students are required to learn ancient civilization life style, eating habits
and their art work, in orer to develop critical thinking. Thus, history acts as gateway for many people
who are curious in joinig archeology field and research. Similarly, phenomenon of Global warming was predicted by scientists several years back that happened due to mutiple reasons such as destruction of ozone layer,
adding pollution to the atmosphere. By knowing this, preventive techniques are incorporated such as equipped machine in vehicles to reduce smoke, modified design of air conditoners and refergerator to reduce assimilation of free radicles in the atmosphere. As a result, pure atmosphere is considerably reducing the rate of lung cancer that caused by inhaling harmful gases.
In summarising, it is worth saying that we can not imagine our life without historical backgorund. Learning about past provide tremendous positive outcomes and sets a stage for the success. No sphere of human life can be flourished with ignorance. Therefore, there is stringent need to emphaize study of past for students irrespective of field.
- Parents involvement in child s education 89
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- Patents involvement in child's education. 3
- What measures should government adopt to solve problems in economy?1: building public library,2:public transportation system or to3:organize strong police forceGive your opinion and explain in detail with examples. 76
- Some people think that human needs for farmland, housing and industry are more important than saving land for endangered animals. Do you agree or disagree with this point of view? 60
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...f past. Although, some people think that studying about ancient time is useless, ...
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...ry to know about important discovery. about contribution. To create latest complex ...
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Suggestion: create the latest
...ant discovery. about contribution. To create latest complex machinery principle of resistan...
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...mplex machinery principle of resistance and and conductivity acts as pillar; which wer...
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... high density and high temprature states and changes happened at the that time. ...
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...ion system; history is mandatory subject in schools everywhere. Students are requ...
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... history acts as gateway for many people who are curious in joinig archeology fie...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, similarly, so, therefore, thus, in fact, such as, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 43.0788530466 44% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2016.0 1977.66487455 102% => OK
No of words: 368.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47826086957 4.8611393121 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37987740619 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97873687088 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 240.0 212.727598566 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.652173913043 0.524837075471 124% => OK
syllable_count: 642.6 618.680645161 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.5321634692 48.9658058833 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.0 100.406767564 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4444444444 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.22222222222 5.45110844103 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 13.0 4.53405017921 287% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.236089414692 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.076458572812 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0737576698707 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.150856017488 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 11.7677419355 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 58.1214874552 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.5 10.9000537634 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.34 8.01818996416 129% => OK
difficult_words: 133.0 86.8835125448 153% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 10.002688172 125% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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