Some young adults want independence from their parents as soon as possible Other young adults prefer to liver with their families for a longer time Which of these situations do you think is better

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...them for a younger time. In my opinion, i feel that young adults should prefer to...
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...e with their families for a longer time.I feel this for 2 main reasons , which I ...
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...nger time.I feel this for 2 main reasons , which I will explain in the following p...
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...graphs. First of all, as young adults , you are new to the world and just growi...
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...pport you in whatever decisions you take , hence having a family around makes it e...
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...best for you. My personal experience is a best example of this , in my difficult ...
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...nal experience is a best example of this , in my difficult times , whenever i used...
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... example of this , in my difficult times , whenever i used to feel low , my parent...
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...this , in my difficult times , whenever i used to feel low , my parents have alwa...
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...cult times , whenever i used to feel low , my parents have always been my ray of h...
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... to achieve better things in life. Hence , its certainly clear that why I prefer l...
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... adults. Secondly, being young adults , its the best time for us to spend time ...
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...ults. Secondly, being young adults , its the best time for us to spend time with...
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... with our parents. Since we do not have much responsibilities on us , we can spend t...
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... do not have much responsibilities on us , we can spend time with parents or trave...
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...s with them and make the best memories. Moreover with aging , we become busy enough to s...
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...e the best memories. Moreover with aging , we become busy enough to spare seconds ...
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...eantime our parents are also growing old , perhaps declining physically and mental...
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...physically and mentally. For this reason , I think spending most of my time with m...
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...young adults is better. In conclusion , I do feel that as young adults , one sh...
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...clusion , I do feel that as young adults , one should live with their families for...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, i feel, i think, in conclusion, first of all, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 53.0 43.0788530466 123% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1427.0 1977.66487455 72% => OK
No of words: 314.0 407.700716846 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.54458598726 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43366598894 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 212.727598566 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.503184713376 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 435.6 618.680645161 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.106483984 48.9658058833 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.916666667 100.406767564 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1666666667 20.6045352989 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0833333333 5.45110844103 185% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 5.5376344086 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.44089457255 0.236089414692 187% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.186603157573 0.076458572812 244% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105925502355 0.0737576698707 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.318084476684 0.150856017488 211% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0935497721745 0.0645574589148 145% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 58.1214874552 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.35 10.9000537634 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.24 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 86.8835125448 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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