Some young adults want independence from their parents as soon as possible.
Other young adults prefer to live with their families for a longer time. Which of these situations do you think is better? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion. Be sure to use your own words. Do not use memorized examples.
Everyone in this world wants to live in a place where they don't have to take much efforts to survive. One of such cozy, comfortable places is our parent's home. There are some people who don't want to leave their parent's house for a longer time, but I am think that adults should move out, away from their family as early as possible. There are multiple reasons for doing so.
Firstly, living away from your parents or family gives you the independence to do things on you own. You learn a lot of new things, which, if you would have stayed with your family you wouldn't have even done. For instance, I moved out of my house for education, and it taught me a lot of things, such as cooking, doing the laundry by myself. If I would have been home, I wouldn't have learnt it as my mother would always take care of those things. Therefore, independence from family teaches you a lot of things, the hard way maybe, but you become truly independent.
Secondly, if you stay away from home, you don't have any restrictions which you generally have if you are staying at home, and you have to listen to your parents even if you don't agree with them sometimes. This is one of the reasons young people would want to stay alone, as this the stage in teenager's life where they don't like dominance from others. For example, one of my college friend still stays at home with her parents, and there is a time restriction at her place, she has to reach home before 10 p.m. . I obviously don't have any restrictions as I stay an independent flat, and can stay out for as much time I want. So, avoiding restriction from parents can be one of the major reasons why children want to stay independently.
Additionally, in my view, if you stay with your parents, you don't interact with the outer world much, and have very little knowledge about the basic processes in your community. To illustrate this, the person who lives independently, knows how to manage the phone bills, electricity bills, maintainance of the broken things in the home on his own, and tries to create contacts with the people, where as, I think , people who live home are a bit isolated from the society. Also, he learns to manage the finances well, which in turn, a person living with parents would have little knowledge about. Therefore, living independently can benefit an individual.
From all the points mentioned above, we can conclude, that children should move out of their house, away from their parents at an early age. This would help them become, comparatively more mature and independent than the adults living with their families. Living independently has a lot of advantages, and hence, parents should, themselves, encourage their wards to move out of house at an early age.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, well, as to, for example, for instance, i think, such as, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 61.0 43.0788530466 142% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 67.0 52.1666666667 128% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2267.0 1977.66487455 115% => OK
No of words: 486.0 407.700716846 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6646090535 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.69525374022 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51531104905 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 212.727598566 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.471193415638 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 702.0 618.680645161 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 9.0 1.86738351254 482% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.5381272157 48.9658058833 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.952380952 100.406767564 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1428571429 20.6045352989 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.19047619048 5.45110844103 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.5376344086 307% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.30979892759 0.236089414692 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10486590119 0.076458572812 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0702300997199 0.0737576698707 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189227912912 0.150856017488 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0514979592664 0.0645574589148 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 11.7677419355 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 58.1214874552 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.05 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 86.8835125448 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.