There are myriad factor or consideration which take into that, some adults to prefer their families for longer time and some prefer don't live with their parents they want to live them as soon as possible. As far as I am concerned according to the following reason and from my personal experience, I am of the conviction that living with their parents is much better but do not depend on them. Someone can consciously weight pros and cons of each side. The reason will be explored followed in the essay.
The first exquisite reason which gives adherences to my viewpoint with experience. Living with parents can be helpful in two ways first is sun always get the advice from their parents as they are more connected when the leave them and furthermore when to live with their parents feel happy as their sun is living with them. my experience is the best example of this I mostly live out of town for the job but whenever i get chance i came back to my home and spend time with family as I see simile on my parents face when I come back to them and try to spend as much of my time with them.
Apart from the fact mention above one should consider regard another subtle point meticulously perteting to optened with huge experience. The noteworthy refreshing intelligible statistics, revealed by a social research recently conducted in my country, That if adults live with there parents their chances of doing big mistake in career are relatively low then who live without their parents and make as experience factor came to play in this. To shed more light on this topic according to the research done in Delhi University show that young adults and their parents feel happier they lived alone their, happiness ratio is higher.
Admittedly, someone can give justification to the other side. as they can say that in the modern world if someone lived with their parent is not considered matureness, they can say young adults want freedom they don't want to give answers to anyone so they live away from their parents because of parents authority but I am still affirmed that living which parents are better than living alone.
In summary, from the aftermentioned fact above I think to live with the parent and families is better as they keep combing the hole families together.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, so, still, then, apart from, i think, in summary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1876.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 400.0 407.700716846 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.472135955 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44562875351 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.4825 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 591.3 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.1344086022 149% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 90.8003857876 48.9658058833 185% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.307692308 100.406767564 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.7692307692 20.6045352989 149% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.92307692308 5.45110844103 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.439068488775 0.236089414692 186% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.152148023503 0.076458572812 199% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.129695503436 0.0737576698707 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.261906408221 0.150856017488 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0700739966543 0.0645574589148 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 11.7677419355 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.1575268817 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.51 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 86.8835125448 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.0537634409 139% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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