Sports and social activities are important and should receive financial support. Agree or disagree.
People spend a quarter of their lives studying at school, colleges and universities. Educational institutions play an important role in people's lives. They can affect people's future. This means that the eduactional system should be regulated reasonably. In some schools or colleges the main attention is given to classes and libraries. In my opinion, sports and social activities are as vital as classes and libraries so they should receive equal financia support for some serious reasons.
In the first place, sports and social activities are considered one of the important ways to deal qith stress. While studying, students may have several problems connected with their families, teachers, friends. Sports and social activities may give the student a chance to forget about the problem for a while. It is even believed that sports may clarify the student's mind, so that the student may solve his problem after doing activities. For example, our school has tree big fields for playing basketball and volleyball. After a long tough dat my classmates and I go there and play basketball. It helps ux to forget that days lessons and enjoy ourselves.
In the second place, sports and social activities give students a chance to develop their social skills. Besides communicating with students in terms of learning, attending sport events may help the students to get to know each other form another angle. While doing their classwork, students cannot talk about their preferences, such as, favourite movie or song. Also, by participating in sport events, students can learn teamwork which will be useful for their future. For example, there was a girl in our class who was very quiet and did not talk to anyone. Our school processed a programme in which students had to attend events which were connected with communication. The quiet girl was participating too. Day to day we noticed her become more open to people. After some time, she ended up with being the most garrulous student in our class.
In the last place, sports and social activities keep students healthy and fit. Should the student sit all day and does not do any activities he will become indolent which has damaging effect on his mental and physical health. Especially, should the student want to become an athlete he will have to take care of himself. He must think about eating properly. For example, my friend was obese, so I suggested that he should regularly attend his PE lessons. Some time later, he lost his weight.
In conclusion, I want to say that the governments should not ignore sports and social activities at schools because they can help students to deal with stress, learn social skills and be healty.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...upport for some serious reasons. In the first place, sports and social acti...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, if, may, second, so, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, in the first place, in the second place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 9.8082437276 194% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2265.0 1977.66487455 115% => OK
No of words: 447.0 407.700716846 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06711409396 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.59808378696 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59322814553 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 237.0 212.727598566 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.530201342282 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 660.6 618.680645161 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 20.6003584229 141% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.4650372091 48.9658058833 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.1034482759 100.406767564 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4137931034 20.6045352989 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.86206896552 5.45110844103 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.88709677419 225% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20960826415 0.236089414692 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0573172320788 0.076458572812 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0830367279754 0.0737576698707 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13922039195 0.150856017488 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0443889933532 0.0645574589148 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 11.7677419355 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 11.83 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 86.8835125448 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => The average readability is low. Need to improve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Try to use less pronouns (like 'It, I, They, We, You...') as the subject of a sentence.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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