Students have different opinions when it comes to the debate that which type of teaching style they prefer? Some students believe that solely teacher delivers the lecture in the classroom is better as it allows maximum use of lecture time. While others prefer classroom in which students are engaged in conversation.
In my opinion, the later one is a better approach as it is more efficient way of teaching and teaches other important skills necessary for a real world. It helps students to develop a broad view of the subject.
First, students’ engagement in class makes classroom study more enjoyable for students. In a situation, when students have to just listen to the lecture, makes class boring for students. On the other hand, engagement in dialogue makes the study more interesting for students as they participate in the learning process. It helps students to pay attention in class rather than becoming a passive listener. Interest in learning motivates students to understand the concept and learn efficiently. In a traditional method, where a teacher explains, students may not understand and retain information. If students are allowed to ask questions and clear their doubts, it helps them to understand and remember in a better way.
Second, dialogue engagement helps students to do critical thinking and problem solving. A teacher encourages students to do a discussion or make a presentation, students think over the topic; try to find out the solution based on their knowledge and experience. This helps them to develop thinking process and solve problems. Students learn communication skills which are essential in real world work environment. During a classroom discussion, students learn to debate with their classmate and explain their views. Learning through discussion makes student better thinker and communicator. These are important skills that help students in a real- world work environment.
Third, students’ participation in discussion helps to learn materials from a different perspective. In a classroom where a professor delivers the topic, students learns from what teacher explains to them. During a discussion, students learn from other students as well. This helps them to learn about the topic from a different view- points. Students develop a broader knowledge base about the topic. For example, during my exercise therapy class in college, I learned a lot from other students. Our instructor explained us basic principles of strengthening for leg muscle and gave several examples. Then, during a discussion, I came to know different leg exercises that other students in the class discussed. If only a teacher had taught in class, I would not have thought about other varieties of exercises.
In conclusion, I believe that student engages in a classroom discussion is a better teaching method as it is beneficial for students. Active participation of students with teacher’s guidance is an effective way of teaching. It helps them to learn and to prepare for the future.
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Essay evaluation report
as it is more efficient way
as it is a more efficient way
students learns from what teacher explains to them
students learn from what teacher explains to them
flaws:
No. of Words: 427 while No. of Different Words: 193
Avg. Sentence Length: 15.25 21.0
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 22 in 30
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 2 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 28 15
No. of Words: 427 350
No. of Characters: 2211 1500
No. of Different Words: 193 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.546 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.178 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.857 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 170 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 144 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 111 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 62 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 15.25 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.11 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.429 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.343 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.499 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.15 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, may, second, so, then, third, well, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 52.1666666667 117% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2293.0 1977.66487455 116% => OK
No of words: 427.0 407.700716846 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3700234192 4.8611393121 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54576487731 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04049096981 2.67179642975 114% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 212.727598566 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.473067915691 0.524837075471 90% => OK
syllable_count: 675.0 618.680645161 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Interrogative: 2.0 0.994623655914 201% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6003584229 136% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.7983583057 48.9658058833 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 81.8928571429 100.406767564 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.25 20.6045352989 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.82142857143 5.45110844103 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 11.8709677419 160% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252790665276 0.236089414692 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0831767988525 0.076458572812 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0446518339906 0.0737576698707 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150266127796 0.150856017488 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.02277891009 0.0645574589148 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 11.7677419355 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.27 10.9000537634 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 86.8835125448 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Try to use less pronouns (like 'It, I, They, We, You...') as the subject of a sentence.
Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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