Nowadays, which school projects to choose has already become a debatable topic disscussed by college students. Personally speaking, I prefer to choose visit and assist elderly people with daliy tasks for the following reasons.
Assisting old people with daily tasks can bring a number of benefits to both students and senior citizens. For one thing, students are able to pick up some basic life skill and develop a well-rounded character, which is essential for their future life. For example, if they share with the old people the latest event happening both at home and abroad, they can develop communication skills which play an important part in forming relationships as they grow up . At the same time the more time they spend with the old, the more likely that they will have a broader view of life because the senior generation may pass on words of wisdom to them and give sound advice when they are in times of hardship. Moreover, by helping old people do domestic chores such as sweeping the floor, cooking simple dishes and watering the garden, they can become more independent in their own household. Another benefit is that accompanying old people makes it possible for them to live more varied lifestyles after retirement. For example, telling some interesting stories and jokes can help relieve their loneliness and keep their spirits high as they face the difficulties that old age brings. In addition, if the students demonstrate how to use advanced technology like smart phones and computers, senior citizens will be able to better relate to the younger generation and communicate frequently with them through social media like WeChat, which will help them stay in touch with their loved ones. Therefore, helping old people can not only turn university students into more well-rounded characters, but it can also make the lives of the elderly more enjoyable.
However, I feel there are potential drawbacks with the other two volunteering options. Helping students in a nearby school with reading and mathematics is far from easy, because this practice requires university students to possess both solid subject knowledge and efficient teaching techniques. With the ready availability of personal devices such as computers and mobile phones, students especially those who lack self-discipline might spend time checking Facebook and chatting with their friends online instead of paying attention to the teacher. In this respect, keeping their attention and making them concentrate on their studies is difficult for novice teachers without years of professional training. Therefore, in order to ensure a positive outcome, university students have to undergo weeks of professional training, which is not so practical. Likewise, most of the university students may find building a house challenging in that it not only requires collaboration across multiple disciplines including physics and material science but involves many arduous and complicated processes ranging from selecting building materials, designing rooms to installing plumbing grounds. This is never a simple task even for professional architects with many years of experience, let alone amateur university students. It is therefore highly unlikely that university students can acquire such extensive knowledge of teaching and construction in a short period of time and put it into practice effectively as a volunteer.
To conclude, that is why I prefer to visit and asist senior citizens with domestic chores as my holiday project.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, likewise, may, moreover, so, therefore, well, for example, i feel, in addition, such as, for one thing
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 13.8261648746 159% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 69.0 52.1666666667 132% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2968.0 1977.66487455 150% => OK
No of words: 551.0 407.700716846 135% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38656987296 4.8611393121 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.84493438435 4.48103885553 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81249985414 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 307.0 212.727598566 144% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557168784029 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 920.7 618.680645161 149% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.1344086022 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.1297777102 48.9658058833 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.4 100.406767564 148% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.55 20.6045352989 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.3 5.45110844103 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.5376344086 289% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.306407225621 0.236089414692 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0879072397463 0.076458572812 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.050866593548 0.0737576698707 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152659536543 0.150856017488 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0697402928521 0.0645574589148 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.7 11.7677419355 150% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 58.1214874552 61% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.1575268817 148% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.28 10.9000537634 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.5 8.01818996416 118% => OK
difficult_words: 158.0 86.8835125448 182% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.0537634409 127% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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