There are many products from various countries in the market. Some people claim supermarkets should only sell food produce from within their country rather than from overseas, because we should protect our culture. However, I strongly disagree. I will tell you two reasons that why I disagree this opinion
First, the culture will not be diversified. We can learn about the country indirectly and share our own culture by using things from various countries. However, if we use only our products, the exchange of goods will decrease, which will damage the economy and the quality of people’s lives will be lower than before. For example, if we use our cell phone only in Samsung, the culture will become too same and there will be no competition and then there will be less opportunity to develop further.
Second, consumer freedom must also be recognized. People also have the right to buy goods from the country they want and if they do not sell products from other countries this is the same as ignoring consumers. That is why we have to sell a variety of goods of the rights of consumers.
This is all about the reasons why the supermarkets should sell various countries' products; culture and consumer’s right. If it is really to protect the country's goods, I think it is right to encourage consumers to buy more domestic products, not this way.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
...reasons that why I disagree this opinion First, the culture will not be diversifi...
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...more domestic products, not this way.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, really, second, so, then, for example, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 43.0788530466 58% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 52.1666666667 46% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1129.0 1977.66487455 57% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 232.0 407.700716846 57% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86637931034 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 4.48103885553 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53063498092 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 212.727598566 59% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.538793103448 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 338.4 618.680645161 55% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.94265232975 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.5221439612 48.9658058833 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.0833333333 100.406767564 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3333333333 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.45110844103 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.316950331121 0.236089414692 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11801281834 0.076458572812 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.142787436247 0.0737576698707 194% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.221209994502 0.150856017488 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.172095149647 0.0645574589148 267% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 11.7677419355 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 86.8835125448 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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