People are deciding every day, every hour, or even evey minute. There diversified opinions on whether deciding abruptly should be considered as a wise virtue or thiking before making decision is more lucrative. Despite the fact that some people hold the idea that people should improve their ability of prompt decision making since most of the time they do not have sufficient time to think before their decision, I believe otherwise, maintaining that pondering utterly before making a decision is the key to success and prosperity. In what follows, I will delve into the most persuasive reasons to substantiate my perspective.
Without a doubt, the most consequential reason corroborating my stance on this subject is that when contemplating before decieing, people can see the different aspect of the issues with which they cope. They can make better decision and work through their difficulties in more productive and efficient way. According to a survey conducted by Illinois State Univeristy, managers who think and consult with their counslers beofre makiing big decisions, run their companies better than those make abrupt decisions. Admittedly, sometimes, it is required to make fast decisions, however, in most cases, allocating a time to think about the pros and cons of various decisions provide people with more promising outcomes in the longrun. Therefore, this reason manifest that thinking thoroughly before deciding is the key factor contributing to prosperity. The more people think before making decision, the more they are likey to obtain fruitful results.
Although the previous reason is the first one crossing the mind at frist glance, another remarkable point deserving some words here is that getting used to snap decision making puts people's mental health in danger. People who are used to deciding without thinking endure an unbearable amount of stress since they make themsleves decide in the moments. These people are more prone to mental illnesses and diseases than those who are used to thinking before deciding. Take my father as an example. My father always decide at the moment wothout conducting any thinking beofrehand. He has suffered from anxiety and highl-level of stress since last year. I used to be like my father, but recently I have decided to change my attitude. I know that if I do not get myslef ride of this peculiar feature, I will confront the mental issues just like that my father is suffering from it currently. This this point illustrates the fact that pondering adequately is a promising factor resulting in healthy mental state.
To make the long story short, many people are in favor of snap decision because they think that by thinking too musch they will lose time. Nevertheless, the foregoing reason lead us to conlcude that not only do thinking before making decision results in better outcomes, but it also guarantees mental healthiness.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: This
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, nevertheless, so, therefore, in most cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 43.0788530466 116% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 52.1666666667 121% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.0752688172 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2440.0 1977.66487455 123% => OK
No of words: 468.0 407.700716846 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21367521368 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65116196802 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68958619742 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 246.0 212.727598566 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.525641025641 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 771.3 618.680645161 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.6737279949 48.9658058833 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.19047619 100.406767564 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2857142857 20.6045352989 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.47619047619 5.45110844103 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173492442912 0.236089414692 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0565055535182 0.076458572812 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0471882317519 0.0737576698707 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124192184356 0.150856017488 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0249858436305 0.0645574589148 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 11.7677419355 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 10.9000537634 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 86.8835125448 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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