During the evolution of human beings, education has always been an essential element of human history. Nowadays, in a society with highly development Internet, which makes it never easier for people to gain information, this technical advance makes some begin to think that teachers are not appreciated and valued by the society as in the past. Personally, I doubt this statement.
For one thing, the attitude that the majority hold toward education have changed a lot in comparison with the past time. People have now realized the significance of education to the individual development so most parents are investing more money and energy into their children's education, just in case that their children will fall behind the era. So the social position of teachers have reached a peek status than ever before. For example, my grandfather often told me that when he was young, his family couldn't afford his tuition fee so he had to drop from school and became a child worker to supply his starving family. He used his own experience to stimulate me to study hard and always told me that I should respect and be grateful to my teachers.
Second, to adjust their teaching methods to the changing society, teachers themselves are also looking for advancements in their classes. For instance, many teachers has introduced the multi-media devices into the classes, making the classes more vivid and appealing to students. Moreover, the relationship between teachers and students has transformed into partnerships of equal status from the old convention which advocated the dominance of teachers. This brings the more frequent and more smooth communication between students and teachers, which helps them to build a strong friendship. No one can deny that the changes are going in the good direction. Students now are not afraid of their teachers, on contrary, they are willing to share their thoughts with them and keep a intimate relationship even after they graduate.
Admittedly, some may argue that teachers are playing are increasingly weaker role in education thanks to the development and easy availability of Internet, on which all kinds of knowledge can be obtained by simply clicking the mouse. This view seems plausible at first glance, but is it really the case? I doubt that. The information on the Internet is so numerous that it inevitably contain something wrong or harmful to the children, like the violence or pornography. In order for the students to exploit the Internet in an healthy and effective way, here come teachers to guide them how to use the computer and how to distinguish right from wrong, tell good from bad.
Take all of the facts I have discussed above, we can conclude that teachers are playing a more and more important role, which can never be replaced by anything else, in the educational field.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, may, moreover, really, second, so, for example, for instance, for one thing
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 67.0 52.1666666667 128% => OK
Nominalization: 24.0 8.0752688172 297% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2374.0 1977.66487455 120% => OK
No of words: 468.0 407.700716846 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07264957265 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65116196802 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73912289143 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 263.0 212.727598566 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561965811966 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 731.7 618.680645161 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.6806681812 48.9658058833 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.7 100.406767564 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4 20.6045352989 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.15 5.45110844103 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130747947924 0.236089414692 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0343778551576 0.076458572812 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0441500814069 0.0737576698707 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0746671239474 0.150856017488 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0394506104513 0.0645574589148 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 11.7677419355 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 58.1214874552 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 10.9000537634 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 118.0 86.8835125448 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 10.002688172 125% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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