INDEPENDENT WRITING
There are times when it is acceptable not tell the truth. Agree / Disagree
Truthfulness is the best characteristic of every person. Honesty is make person more powerful personality in society. Tell truth or lie is depended of person is every have personal choice but in my point of view there same time not tell the truth.
To begin with, tell truth is good quality of every person. In this competitions era not always tell truth to same one, if sometime people tell not true is depend on situations. Their motive is not wrong. They think about to motivate to other people. If person tell lie in same situation but that lie is change other people life in good way so that person not lie. For example. When I was in 10 standers that time my father told me if I cleared 10 exam then he bought new iPhone for me. My father give me lot of confidence to clear exam he knows I not able to clear exams. I work hard and clear 10 exams with good score. My father is motivated me to clear exam.
Furthermore, sometime tell truth its leads to danger so not tell truth. Person not tell personal store to someone else. They not feel to tell truth about life so it is not necessary to tell truth. Small lie is make bright future. For an instance, last year I shared to one secret to my friend about how was I selected in university for graduations. My friend shared to everyone in college and trusty rusticate me so not tell truth. Sometime it lead to danger and spoiled future.
To sum up, due to above reason sometime tell truth its lead to danger and small lie its make to confidence to other and it’s help to motivate to other. Hence, I agree with this statement it is acceptable not tell the truth.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, hence, if, so, then, for example, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 9.8082437276 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1415.0 1977.66487455 72% => OK
No of words: 318.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.44968553459 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37679994443 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 212.727598566 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.465408805031 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 450.9 618.680645161 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.5376208443 48.9658058833 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.3181818182 100.406767564 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4545454545 20.6045352989 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.45454545455 5.45110844103 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 11.8709677419 160% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.373001822613 0.236089414692 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118319415983 0.076458572812 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.146647809059 0.0737576698707 199% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.294364474577 0.150856017488 195% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.325000661479 0.0645574589148 503% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.8 11.7677419355 58% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 58.1214874552 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.1575268817 63% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.94 10.9000537634 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.66 8.01818996416 83% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 86.8835125448 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.