In today’s world, it is more important to work quickly and risk making mistakes than to work slowly and make sure that everything is correct.
With the advent of new technological equipment, which have been brought to our century, there has been much debate on whether people should do work as fast as new technology or on. I personally believe that, in comparison to new digital computers, human beings have some pros and cons. Individuals should not be compare the computers. In fact, men can benefits greatly from doing work slow and in a continuous manner which is a better strategy to do work perfectly.
Time is the greatest motivation for ones who are hurried to do work; in fact, they want to reach their goals and aims as soon as possible. However, It is worthy of notice that the time we spend doing certain preparations for doing work are not the waste of time at all. Many well-known management books suggest that before starting an affair, the preparation stage is necessary. In this stage all required equipment and facilities are estimated and listed, a pre-plan for a different stages, from concept to implementation, are prepared and finally a time schedule is presented. Although, the preparation stage takes a long time to prepared, it plays an important role to reach the final success. Individuals who want to do their duties as fast as possible, often ignore some apparently insignificant stages, while they greatly contribute to save cost and time in the next stages. In my opinion, doing work quickly at the expense of degrading quality and performance as well as loosing final success is not a good idea.
Although, making mistakes is unavoidable for human beings, it can become least when individuals pay more consideration to works they do. Besides, some apparently small and unimportant mistakes can become sometimes big disasters. For example, the disaster occurred for smart phone Samsung Note 7 is a vivid example of human errors which resulted in a couple of billion dollars loss and bad reputation for a big company like Samsung. This example clearly shows that even most unimportant duties should be taken into account as a big part of the whole and be done carefully. After finishing a certain affair several checkup stages should be accomplished to prevent gigantic disasters. Therefore, it is clear that one is not able to work carefully without spend enough time.
In the light of aforementioned details regarding the speed of doing affairs, I generally believe that spending enough time to do work carefully is more reasonable that doing work as quick as possible.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 395, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a continuous manner" with adverb for "continuous"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...nefits greatly from doing work slow and in a continuous manner which is a better strategy to do work p...
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Line 2, column 484, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'stage'?
Suggestion: stage
... and listed, a pre-plan for a different stages, from concept to implementation, are pr...
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Line 3, column 197, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[9]
Message: The adverb 'sometimes' is usually put before the verb 'become'.
Suggestion: sometimes become
...ntly small and unimportant mistakes can become sometimes big disasters. For example, the disaste...
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Line 3, column 572, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...art of the whole and be done carefully. After finishing a certain affair several chec...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, besides, but, finally, however, if, regarding, so, therefore, well, while, for example, in fact, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 43.0788530466 53% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2055.0 1977.66487455 104% => OK
No of words: 411.0 407.700716846 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50256981431 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81110254592 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 212.727598566 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559610705596 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 649.8 618.680645161 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.9142275264 48.9658058833 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.166666667 100.406767564 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8333333333 20.6045352989 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.44444444444 5.45110844103 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137094541367 0.236089414692 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0454826822333 0.076458572812 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0544600112586 0.0737576698707 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0937840697723 0.150856017488 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0293819530107 0.0645574589148 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 11.7677419355 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 86.8835125448 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.