In today’s world, it is more important to work quickly and risk making mistakes than to work slowly and make sure that everything is correct.
Throughout history, in all civilized society, the quality of work has engendered copious controversies among people. Some people may hold the view that it is better to do every work fast with mistakes. However, others may take an opposite viewpoint and believe that it is necessary to perform your work slowly with no mistakes. In my point of view, it is more important to work quickly and risk making mistakes than to work slowly and make sure that everything is correct because not only do the technology developed, but also people gain experience.
The first aspect to point out is that technology develops very fast. Nowadays in our world development of the technology happening with a dramatic rate of speed and this leads to changes and one of these changes is cost. With this development the price of substantial increases. Therefore, it is crucial for people to work swiftly and finish their job and gaining more money and when this happen it is unavoidable for people to not make mistakes. In this case they can live in peace. For example, when the price of fast food and bill of transportation vehicle increase it affect employee and force them to work in a fast pace and inevitable they make mistake.
The second reason worth mentioning is that people who work rapidly obtain experience. To illustrate, in our world that everything are changing it is a great resume for you to have a lot experiences and these experiences helps you to broaden your mind and have a better perspective. For instance, a person frequently make mistakes are going to learn a lesson and reinforce his mind and after a while he gets an expanded mind which helps him to do everything precise. Moreover, these experiences are very helpful in future and enhance people chances to have better life in the future.
To summarize, due to the development of the technology and obtain experience it is important to work quickly and risk making mistakes. All the aforementioned reasons lead us to the conclusion that working in a fast pace is better than working in a slow pace. Consequently, it is highly recommended to make mistakes and perform your work fast.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 572, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'affects'?
Suggestion: affects
...l of transportation vehicle increase it affect employee and force them to work in a fa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, however, if, may, moreover, second, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1778.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 367.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8446866485 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37689890912 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77075410427 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.485013623978 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 568.8 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.6995355657 48.9658058833 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.588235294 100.406767564 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5882352941 20.6045352989 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.76470588235 5.45110844103 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.370653265004 0.236089414692 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114091775265 0.076458572812 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.138202586123 0.0737576698707 187% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.243085707643 0.150856017488 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.136565713281 0.0645574589148 212% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 11.7677419355 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 86.8835125448 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 65.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.5 Out of 30
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