today'slife is more comfortable nd wasy than our hrandparents
Life is never easy for anyone. However when we consider points like ease and comfort, surely today's life is more luxurious than our grandparents. So, I agree with the given statement that today's life is easy and comfortable and people has a lot of advantage from it. There are reasons why I support this are explained below.
To begin with, the main reason I feel today's life is easy wholely because of technology. Technology helped in forming many devices, which reduces daily effort and gets completed in lesser time and with more perfection. There was the availability of the same devices years ago but at a higher rate which only rich people could afford but the same product is now available in every house and at a cheaper cost. Let's take a basic example, earlier people used to wash clothes by hand and that needed a lot of effort, a lot of water usage, time-consuming, also hard work because hand and back muscle works a lot in washing clothes. As the people saw this as a problem and technology also advances they made a device in which we just have to put the dirty clothes in and it comes out neat and clean and even dried. So it also doesn't even need any iron. Also, better technology has advanced house design which is far more comfortable than in earlier times.
Another main advantage of today's generation is enjoying education. Today's student has to struggle less than earlier, they only have to read and nothing else. So, they face mental pressure but earlier they have to collect information about where to read, find a school, travel problems, and many more. My father always narrates to me his struggle to study, they had no study material, and to study a single subject they traveled from two to three professors and as that time has the limitation of money and areas were rural, there was no facility of transport, they used to travel long distance without any vehicle. So these are all the problems they face. However. if we see the study status of today's kids, they have huge study material, many study platforms, and on the internet, they get every information. Also today everyone has a vehicle and if some don't have then schools provide their vehicle which picks and drops the child.
So to put it in nutshell, today's generation enjoys a lot of benefits from the advancement of technology, and as we can see as this only advances, the next generation will get more benefits than this generation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, then, as to, i feel, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 13.8261648746 174% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2004.0 1977.66487455 101% => OK
No of words: 428.0 407.700716846 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68224299065 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.548423998 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45369377755 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 233.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544392523364 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 648.9 618.680645161 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.4410718142 48.9658058833 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.473684211 100.406767564 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5263157895 20.6045352989 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.26315789474 5.45110844103 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151977007496 0.236089414692 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0536244390361 0.076458572812 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0687349757398 0.0737576698707 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1097208219 0.150856017488 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0542739421877 0.0645574589148 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 11.7677419355 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.16 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 86.8835125448 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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