TOEFL ESSAY: Leaders like John F. Kennedy and Martin Luther King have made important contributions to other people of the United States. Name another world leader you think is important. Give specific reasons for your choice.
As is stated that John F. Kennedy and Martin Luther King are the most significant world leaders who served the people of the United States with their sense of direction, power, and leadership skills. They were not only inspirational to the world leaders but also to the millions of people around the world. In my opinion, today's world leader is Elon Musk. Because of the fast-paced technological advances that the world is facing today. it is important that the people around the world should trust a leader who is most likely to believe and strive toward the good of the people. I think Elon Musk and his ongoing contributions to the people of the world are important for the following reasons.
First of all, one of the most important factors for the world to move forward is to invent. Elon Musk is one of the most innovative people, who hounds towards his passion for inventing new things which are helpful not only to today's generation but also to future generations. For example, his company SpaceX came up with a new rocket that can land on the Earth after traveling in space. This is not conventional at all, before, all rockets are supposed to combust in space, wasting valuable resources including time and money that were used to make the rocket. Because of this invention, people are getting inspired to think efficiently and are getting motivated to invent new things for the sake of the society and future of Earth.
Secondly, the Earth has many valuable resources that are non-renewable. That means, once the resource is used we cannot reuse it. This can cause much damage to the natural resources around the globe. Like petrol, diesel, and many other natural resources are utilized endlessly without thinking about the future of the planet or about the future generations of the people on the Earth, Elon musk has a hand in making all the resources that his companies use, renewable. For example, his car company, Tesla, utilizes solar energy from the multitude of solar plants that were planted by his own solar energy venture called Solar Roof. This explains the fact that Elon Musk thinks about the future of the people and also the planet that they are living on.
Lastly, artificial intelligence is going to be the next pioneer of all technologies. It has not only helped the world in making the world navigate and scroll through their favorite content on social media sites but also has played a vital role in the breakthrough of many advances in the medical sciences. Musk introduced a new concept of the human brain and computer interface within the realms of Artificial Intelligence. This helps in many ways to the humankind. Hearing out the thoughts of a dumb person, bringing back the treasures of intelligence from the past, and using them for future advances, with the help of this, a human can upload or download any amount of information and can focus on the root cause of major problems instead of the data, these can be few of the many examples, where artificial intelligence can be helpful to the human race.
In conclusion, I can say that even though Elon Musk is not a political leader with political and secular philosophies, he can be viewed as a world leader because of his contributions to the people which in turn do good not only for the United States but also to the entire world. He should be treated as important as any other world leader.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 357, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...nion, todays world leader is Elon Musk. Because of the fast-paced technological advance...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, for example, i think, in conclusion, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 15.1003584229 185% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 84.0 52.1666666667 161% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2801.0 1977.66487455 142% => OK
No of words: 588.0 407.700716846 144% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76360544218 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.9242980521 4.48103885553 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53956782975 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 267.0 212.727598566 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.454081632653 0.524837075471 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 885.6 618.680645161 143% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 84.1618821082 48.9658058833 172% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.04 100.406767564 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.52 20.6045352989 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.64 5.45110844103 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224128570032 0.236089414692 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0754067976394 0.076458572812 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0811553462768 0.0737576698707 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145644920405 0.150856017488 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.126437487359 0.0645574589148 196% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 11.7677419355 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 121.0 86.8835125448 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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