Studying is a fundamental task for students to get good grades on their subjects. Every student has a different way of studying. Some students feel that they will learn more effectively while they are studying alone whereas others think the opposite. I am of the opinion that both ways have their advantages and I am going to argue them in the following essay.
To begin with, one advantage of studying with a group is that you do not have to bear the whole task or assignment. Since the whole duty is shared by the members of the group, it becomes easier than studying alone. By this way, each people can more concentrate on their part. Take my style of preparing for exams as an example. At the university, my exams were so hard that it was impossible to get a good grade by studying alone. So, we would study as a group and share the topic so that every member can specialize in that part. In the end, each member would lecture their parts to the others. By this way, we could learn more effectively without getting exhausted.
Furthermore, studying with a group provides members with an opportunity to learn more information than studying alone. Usually, members of the group make a decision after many arguments. In the decision-making process, they gain new points of view by discussing with others. For example, we were demanded to make a presentation of economic conditions in Turkey with my friends in front of the classroom as a group. So, I was bad at the economy and could not make any contribution to the presentation. Fortunately, one of my friends was interested in economic issues so; I, like other members of the group, was enlightened by his knowledge and learned new information on that subject.
On the other hand, studying alone is more beneficial and preferable in some cases. Some assignments or subjects require more concentration and to think deeper. So; being alone and listening to only your mind may be more effective. For example, in high school, I had to write a paper about friendship. Our teacher allowed us to make a group of 2 or 3 people. Some of my friends thought that it was easier and productive to write many ideas but I felt opposite because I thought that it was hard to state your feelings since studying with a group might prevent you to listen to your mind. It was about our feelings and should also be pure. In the end, my essay was the best because I was able to dive into my inner world.
To sum up, I believe that both ways of studying have their advantages depending on different situations. The most important thing is which one is suitable for you.
- Tpo 28- integrated writing 80
- TPO 14 Integrated writing 86
- Some people prefer to travel alone. Others like to travel in groups. Which do you think is the best way to travel? Use specific reasons and examples to explain your choice. 60
- TOEFL TPO 13 - Integrated Writing Task 71
- TPO 29-Integrated writing 80
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, may, so, whereas, while, for example, in some cases, to begin with, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 43.0788530466 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 73.0 52.1666666667 140% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2153.0 1977.66487455 109% => OK
No of words: 464.0 407.700716846 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6400862069 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64119157421 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67557429215 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.480603448276 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 675.0 618.680645161 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 4.94265232975 243% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6003584229 136% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.658925315 48.9658058833 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.8928571429 100.406767564 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5714285714 20.6045352989 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.42857142857 5.45110844103 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 11.8709677419 160% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249175938806 0.236089414692 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0637663061034 0.076458572812 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.067455298435 0.0737576698707 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132925986041 0.150856017488 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0310959923125 0.0645574589148 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 11.7677419355 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 10.9000537634 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.19 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 86.8835125448 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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