Topic: some people prefer to get up early in the morning and start the day’s work. Other prefer to get up later in the day and work until late at night.
After inventing bulb’s light people like use time’s night, for doing a job, have an entertainment, and doing anything they need. in spite of the fact that someone work at the night, then loses him or her early morning time, that motion can threat their health, untidy daily schedule, lose their happy and delighted day. As a result, someone gets up in the morning, in my opinion, can be better for some reason, such as good management timing, better lifestyle, and cheerful and enjoyable life.
In the contemporary people to lead a healthy life. Therefore, they need have a good diet, a regular exercise, as well as a sufficient sleep in during the night. Have a good and adequate sleep at night, and in doing so, improve your immune system in the body human and generate appropriate hormones for a good performance’s your body then prevent human from a disease and illness. On the contrary, by an improper sleep cause a stress and nervous mood all of the day can disorder eating and violent behavior for humans in their community. Scientists believe if one gets up early morning can have an orderly exercise in the morning. By doing so, people have a lot of energy and delight mood in the during day. However, people get up lately in the morning, tend to feel drowsy, then tend sleepier during the day. As a consequence, they miss a big part of the day; in addition, not only are exhausted but they are also boring in doing any their day works.
By improving and increasing speed in the world society of high technology, and better using time people need to have good time management and a tidy schedule in the daily program and job. By doing so, if they are using early time in the morning, will promptly go to their jobs. Thus, they have a good business and get a high profit own job. On the other hand, they are doing their work until midnight may get have prospered; however, lose their discipline and probably miss high value job situation. All human like doing their duty by cooperation and teamwork if one like doing work in the midnight, tend to be lonely doing one’s work. Consequently, miss opportunity cooperation in the community finally may be failure in doing the job.
In sum, there are many reason one person can a good choice between two ways in his or her lifestyle. However, everyone can have arbitrary choice, I can only depict the best ways for people and don’t coercion they.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 140, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In
...tainment, and doing anything they need. in spite of the fact that someone work at ...
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Line 2, column 455, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...r sleep cause a stress and nervous mood all of the day can disorder eating and violent beh...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 19, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun reason seems to be countable; consider using: 'many reasons'.
Suggestion: many reasons
...re in doing the job. In sum, there are many reason one person can a good choice between tw...
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Line 4, column 219, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...or people and don't coercion they.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, finally, however, if, may, so, then, therefore, thus, well, in addition, such as, as a result, as well as, in my opinion, in spite of, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 13.8261648746 159% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 43.0788530466 60% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2004.0 1977.66487455 101% => OK
No of words: 427.0 407.700716846 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69320843091 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54576487731 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56002427948 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.491803278689 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 625.5 618.680645161 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 12.0 4.94265232975 243% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.4015021656 48.9658058833 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.473684211 100.406767564 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4736842105 20.6045352989 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2105263158 5.45110844103 187% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225000712423 0.236089414692 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0735031639465 0.076458572812 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0570253974395 0.0737576698707 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137377944891 0.150856017488 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0747995634563 0.0645574589148 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 11.7677419355 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.22 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 86.8835125448 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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