I completely agree that even extra curricular activities like sports and social activities should have equal financial approach because ,most of the universities grade the students according to all the activities they had come across the study duration in the university and most of them are capable of taking their university grade to a higher level,and also it refreshes their daily routine and also make them competitive and supportive to their team ,which builds up relationship.
Financial support to the categories like sports and cultural activities also play and important role,sports and cultural activities are to be conducted every year and not only intra-college,also inter college or universities can be conducted and this even builds up strength between two universities.In order to do such a great activity financial support with a good budget plan will help gain confidence to the students which they receive in terms of trophy.Appreciation with a good certificate or a trophy will keep the student cheered up and would participate with good confidence in the future activities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 15.1003584229 26% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 43.0788530466 26% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 52.1666666667 48% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 927.0 1977.66487455 47% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 171.0 407.700716846 42% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42105263158 4.8611393121 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 4.48103885553 81% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.25788208777 2.67179642975 122% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 212.727598566 49% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.614035087719 0.524837075471 117% => OK
syllable_count: 297.9 618.680645161 48% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.59856630824 10% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 2.0 20.6003584229 10% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 85.0 20.1344086022 422% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.0 48.9658058833 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 463.5 100.406767564 462% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 85.5 20.6045352989 415% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.45110844103 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.53405017921 44% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 11.8709677419 17% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20759257829 0.236089414692 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.158829795465 0.076458572812 208% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.00284741723067 0.0737576698707 4% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158829795465 0.150856017488 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00284741723067 0.0645574589148 4% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 46.8 11.7677419355 398% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -23.26 58.1214874552 -40% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 6.10430107527 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 37.6 10.1575268817 370% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.34 10.9000537634 141% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.45 8.01818996416 143% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 86.8835125448 45% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 32.0 10.002688172 320% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 36.0 10.0537634409 358% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 47.0 10.247311828 459% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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