Some universities utilize their financial resources for developing infra structure in their classes and library. While, some universities spend some money for sports and social events alongside using most of their finance for classes and library improvement. I totally agree that universities and colleges should give equal importance to sports and social activities as well for the following reasons.
First reason is, students need a break after a long schedule of classes and tiresome exams, they can play and relax for sometime. Taking a break can help their brain to focus and ability to think faster in their exams. Many research states that physical training and exercise are also important for one's health which can enhance their cognitive skills. They can easily remember what they study, if their brain rests for some time and stay active.
Another reason is, students can develop socializing by participating in such activities, they can play, talk and make friends easily and work as a team when they play. For example, if students take part in inter school competitions between two colleges or universities, they will get to know what is team spirit and experience the competition which can help to face difficult situations in life. Furthermore, this kind of activities build confidence and communication, helping nature in students.
Although, investing in libraries and classes only helps them in providing resources for education and research but not physical training. For instance, if the school has a stadium or gym or auditorium, students can spend time in other social activities also when they get bored. Some universities offer scholarships for students who are talented or active in sports, so having such activities in their school might help them to obtain scholarships.
Therefore, I totally believe schools should also consider investing in physical and social activities and encourage students to participate in them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, so, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 15.1003584229 26% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 13.8261648746 159% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 43.0788530466 56% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 52.1666666667 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1607.0 1977.66487455 81% => OK
No of words: 295.0 407.700716846 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44745762712 4.8611393121 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78178091962 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583050847458 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 489.6 618.680645161 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.94265232975 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.6265342272 48.9658058833 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.615384615 100.406767564 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6923076923 20.6045352989 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.46153846154 5.45110844103 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 24.0 5.5376344086 433% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131048034402 0.236089414692 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0578857570887 0.076458572812 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0723134177173 0.0737576698707 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.090639163153 0.150856017488 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0807004617844 0.0645574589148 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 11.7677419355 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 58.1214874552 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.1575268817 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.63 10.9000537634 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 86.8835125448 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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