I agree with this statement, because both sports and social activities are important to developing the person during the life.
when the person practises any activities wether sport or social activity, they increase the confidence of himself and has a positive role, that enable to dissolve the problems.
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Essay reference notes: This topic is refereed from another essay topic, developed by user: iPass
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 2, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: When
...eveloping the person during the life. when the person practises any activities wet...
^^^^
Line 2, column 32, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'activities'' or 'activity's'?
Suggestion: activities'; activity's
...e life. when the person practises any activities wether sport or social activity, they i...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 15.1003584229 7% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 9.8082437276 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 13.8261648746 22% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 5.0 43.0788530466 12% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 52.1666666667 10% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 258.0 1977.66487455 13% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 48.0 407.700716846 12% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.375 4.8611393121 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 2.6321480259 4.48103885553 59% => The fourth root words length is low.
Word Length SD: 2.66406122719 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 39.0 212.727598566 18% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.8125 0.524837075471 155% => OK
syllable_count: 83.7 618.680645161 14% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.94265232975 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 2.0 20.6003584229 10% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.0 48.9658058833 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 129.0 100.406767564 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.6045352989 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.45110844103 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.53405017921 44% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 11.8709677419 17% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173431190754 0.236089414692 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.140899555452 0.076458572812 184% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0709270120341 0.0737576698707 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140899555452 0.150856017488 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0709270120341 0.0645574589148 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 11.7677419355 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 58.1214874552 67% => OK
smog_index: 0.0 6.10430107527 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.1575268817 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.22 10.9000537634 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.43 8.01818996416 118% => OK
difficult_words: 14.0 86.8835125448 16% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 40.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 12.0 Out of 30
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