In my point of view, sports and social activities at universities and colleges should receive equal funding. I feel this way for several reasons, which I'll explore in the following essay.
First of all, health is crucial in all people's life because our body is tightly bound with our well-being and has a major impact on our life. We can only study well and excel in our work when being healthy. Very often students are too overwhelmed by copious sorts of assignments and spend little attention to working out, playing sports, and resting mind from studies. Additionally, sports and social activities are fun and entertaining. Not only it benefits your health, but also has an important affect on your social interactions. Doing outside activities may help us getting other people better, making new friends and leading to releasement all of the stress, which is our body filled up in the periods of hardship. Therefore, sports and social activities should be regarded with the same stress of importance and financial support as classes and libraries have.
Another reason for my opinion is that a successful student should be a well-rounded person, having different skills and an experienced practitioner in many spheres. By participating in the activities stated above, students would be able to fully realize their potential and figure out what their strengths and weaknesses are. Hence, it’d affect their personality, and raise their confidence in themselves. So they'd be more comfortable making mistakes and wouldn't hesitate asking for help. This would certainly bring positive results in a classroom because they'd learn material better and progress rapidly. Thus, universities and colleges should consider spending their funding on other activities, such as sports and social activities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, may, so, therefore, thus, well, i feel, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 43.0788530466 51% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 52.1666666667 61% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1521.0 1977.66487455 77% => OK
No of words: 284.0 407.700716846 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35563380282 4.8611393121 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81253843457 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.665492957746 0.524837075471 127% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 618.680645161 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.1910984393 48.9658058833 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.4 100.406767564 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9333333333 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.45110844103 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189547401733 0.236089414692 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0670323753245 0.076458572812 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0936179424279 0.0737576698707 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137596566872 0.150856017488 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0632520929366 0.0645574589148 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 11.7677419355 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 10.9000537634 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 86.8835125448 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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