Universities and colleges are the place where talents can be explored and strength can be realized. Education along with sports and social activities contributes to the holistic development of an individual. So, I believe that funding for sports and social activities are as important as it is for education.
A student spends his most crucial part of his lifetime in his universities and college where he gets to realize himself and his talents and ultimately choose his future. If the universities provide with enough facilities for sports and social activities, he can always learn more than just being a book worm. However, educational institutions are primarily aimed at providing good education for students. But in today's competitive world education alone is not enough.
There is a saying that " Don't be another brick in the wall" which in depth means discover your talents and use it to give back to the society. Sports helps a person think better and & faster which helps him perform well in his academics. Apart from that, if he is really into sports he can become pride of the nation.
The last reason is that, participating in social activities improves the Communication skills of students. It helps them interact more with the outside world which is indirectly preparing one for their future jobs.
So, what I infer is, financial support should be made equally so that every student has a big time.
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'however', 'if', 'really', 'so', 'well', 'apart from']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.225190839695 0.229887763892 98% => OK
Verbs: 0.164122137405 0.158761421928 103% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0687022900763 0.0866891130778 79% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0763358778626 0.046263068375 165% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0763358778626 0.0685040099705 111% => OK
Prepositions: 0.12213740458 0.118717715034 103% => OK
Participles: 0.0343511450382 0.0351676179071 98% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.77114663648 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0152671755725 0.0309702414327 49% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0648854961832 0.0887237588012 73% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0190839694656 0.0209618222197 91% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0229007633588 0.0139019557991 165% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1464.0 2387.08602151 61% => OK
No of words: 237.0 408.028673835 58% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.17721518987 5.86048508987 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 4.48200974243 88% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.367088607595 0.338922669872 108% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.261603375527 0.251872472559 104% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.177215189873 0.174417080927 102% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.135021097046 0.112833075102 120% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77114663648 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 212.727598566 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.611814345992 0.524397521467 117% => OK
Word variations: 63.5498551737 59.2087087015 107% => OK
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6684587814 63% => OK
Sentence length: 18.2307692308 20.5533526081 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.8112828834 48.84282405 57% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.615384615 120.699889404 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2307692308 20.5533526081 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.538461538462 0.644075263715 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.54480286738 126% => OK
Readability: 44.3911067835 45.7405998639 97% => OK
Elegance: 1.20481927711 1.45489161554 83% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.291619968444 0.300154397459 97% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0745980250342 0.103427244359 72% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0459584910419 0.0752933317313 61% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.559418672161 0.497263757937 112% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.181820539999 0.151897553556 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110968665209 0.114077575197 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0807736250393 0.0781384742642 103% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.214673901962 0.336927656856 64% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0950684338436 0.067059652881 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161652197066 0.210909579961 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.11347983825 0.0618886996521 183% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8870967742 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.86379928315 26% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.91756272401 41% => OK
Positive topic words: 8.0 8.42114695341 95% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.4623655914 41% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.75985663082 72% => OK
Total topic words: 11.0 13.6433691756 81% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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