To me nothing is more important than a good health. Although many of my friends prefer eating at restaurants, I personally prefer to prepare and eat food at home. I believe that Health is Wealth.
To begin with, hygiene is maintained while cooking at home which lacks in restaurants and food stands. I agree that eating food at restaurants may save money and the time of cooking, which can be spent for some other activity. As a matter of fact, every one knows that eating outside regularly causes sickness because of which the time and money saved will be spent, added to which is sickness.
In second place, since I pursued my education staying in hostel until now, where we don't get enough nutritious food, I would like to balance it now, while staying at home. A famous saying states that, "You are what you eat". Accordingly, the food we intake plays a vital role in managing the fitness of our body and also the mind.
In addition to this, a research has found that food we eat directly impacts on our thoughts too. So, it is very important to maintain a balanced diet which is possible only when cooked on our own at home. When cooked at home, calorie count is recorded on daily basis, which is a win-win because of which we can maintain the physical fitness and also mental health.
As life changes, preferences change, too. For now, however, when I am young and energetic, taking concern of my health for now and future, this is the choice i make.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
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...n staying in hostel until now, where we dont get enough nutritious food, I would lik...
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Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'research'.
Suggestion: research
... also the mind. In addition to this, a research has found that food we eat directly imp...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... for now and future, this is the choice i make.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, however, if, may, second, so, while, in addition, as a matter of fact, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 52.1666666667 63% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1230.0 1977.66487455 62% => OK
No of words: 263.0 407.700716846 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67680608365 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.48103885553 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41723440384 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 212.727598566 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.593155893536 0.524837075471 113% => OK
syllable_count: 370.8 618.680645161 60% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Interrogative: 3.0 0.994623655914 302% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.2413728567 48.9658058833 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.8571428571 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7857142857 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.35714285714 5.45110844103 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.327577033315 0.236089414692 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109596886427 0.076458572812 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.119714083683 0.0737576698707 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176553872301 0.150856017488 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102243762158 0.0645574589148 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 11.7677419355 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.41 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 86.8835125448 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.