There have appeared endless discussion over financial support for sports and social activities. Many people argue that sports and social activities should receive equal financial support as classes and libraries. Personally, I agree with this argument.
First and foremost, what I want to put in my priority is self perfection. It cannot be denided that participating in sports and social activities helps student to reduce stress. Studying in college is alway hard and stressful work. Thus, reducing stress is always necessary to help student gain the best study performent. Therefore, involved in public activities is a great way for student to have better study efficiency. More important, being a sport player or a volunteer for social activities creates chances for student to gain experience in team work. These activities requires many people integrate with each other to do a work. Everybody must have responsibility and understand other members to do the work well. As a consequent, joining in these activities is a great way to develop team work skill - a very important skill for student's future career. With no doubt, participating in sports and public jobs helps students complete themself.
In the second place, personal enjoyment is another essential factor contributing to this essence. The fact is that it is possible for students to meet more people with the same hobbies when they take part in sports and social works. Therefore, students have the chances to find their friends and extend their communication network. This is very important to have an easier life in university or college. As a result, sports and social activities bring student the feeling of happiness. More notably, these activites also make student keep fit and be healthy. Taking part in sports and social works is a good way to burn calories and active student body. Without any doubt, sports and social activities bring student enjoyment.
To summary, all of the mentioned above are convincing reasons for my agreement. It is strongly recommended that people should take my writing into great consideration to adopt appropriate decision on investment in sports and socials activities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, therefore, thus, well, no doubt, as a result, in the second place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 43.0788530466 49% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1845.0 1977.66487455 93% => OK
No of words: 348.0 407.700716846 85% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30172413793 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80660347298 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 212.727598566 87% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.534482758621 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 562.5 618.680645161 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.5829142455 48.9658058833 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 80.2173913043 100.406767564 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1304347826 20.6045352989 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.30434782609 5.45110844103 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193237042727 0.236089414692 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0644293210311 0.076458572812 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0670355513417 0.0737576698707 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147284637534 0.150856017488 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0907699312955 0.0645574589148 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 11.7677419355 94% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.87 10.9000537634 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 86.8835125448 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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