Sports and social activities are important parts in individuals life in any successful society. They are essential for everyone's healthy kind of life in many aspects Some people agree to support such activities financially same as the academic subjects, classes and libraries, while others disagree and prefer to focus on scientific and academic studies. I will agree to support sports and social fields in the same way like study classes and research and reading libraries for obvious reasons that i will mention in this essay.
First, sports and social activities are so important for psychological and biological health in a person's life. The students who practice any kind of sport like football, basketball or baseball or any kind of high activity you will notice they are better in health , have high fitness and proper growth. Also those girls and boys with social activities are wonderful individuals are well connected with society and college campus, have self- confidence more than introvert students who focus only on academic studies. A recent study found that New Yorkers are caring so much with sport, gym and even running daily as they care for these activities more than work problems as they think these are their assets I mean their good health is very important to them. So supporting sports and socials is a critically important for many people success.
Moreover, not all students are alike; some need sport and social practice more than sitting in his room to study, some students are very active and can be great atheletes or national heroes when they practice regular sports and activities. My cousin was his level at high school exams and results fair, his family was not happy with his marks, but in the same time he was very concerned with sports and swimming, he struggled to practice and enroll in the high school team for swimming and he is now famous Olympic swimmer who has won many international medals for his country and couching a lot of people.
Third, better to utilize the youth time and effort in useful activities like sports and social meetings and organizations that's a kind of protection for those kids and youngmen and girls against bad habbits and harmful activities online for example like pornography or addiction of drugs as their energy is functionalized properly in the correct place. I know a lot of students took the path of addiction due to nonenrollment in any activities or social practicing . So supporting these fields by the governments is very essential.
Last but not least, I am definetly agree to support these activities sports and social for all the students, and I suggest to get extra credits for practising regularly these fields in school and college.
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Essay evaluation report
Also those girls and boys with social activities are wonderful individuals are well connected with society
Also those girls and boys with social activities are wonderful individuals and are well connected with society
Sentence: Sports and social activities are important parts in individuals life in any successful society.
Description: A noun, plural, common is not usually followed by a noun, singular, common
Suggestion: Refer to individuals and life
is a critically important for many people success.
is critically important for many people's successes.
is a critically important one for many people's successes.
I am definetly agree to support
I am definitely agreeing to support
I definitely agree to support
Sentence: Moreover, not all students are alike; some need sport and social practice more than sitting in his room to study, some students are very active and can be great atheletes or national heroes when they practice regular sports and activities.
Error: atheletes Suggestion: athletes
Sentence: Third, better to utilize the youth time and effort in useful activities like sports and social meetings and organizations that's a kind of protection for those kids and youngmen and girls against bad habbits and harmful activities online for example like pornography or addiction of drugs as their energy is functionalized properly in the correct place.
Error: functionalized Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: habbits Suggestion: habits
Error: youngmen Suggestion: younger
Sentence: I know a lot of students took the path of addiction due to nonenrollment in any activities or social practicing .
Error: nonenrollment Suggestion: controlled
Sentence: Last but not least, I am definetly agree to support these activities sports and social for all the students, and I suggest to get extra credits for practising regularly these fields in school and college.
Error: practising Suggestion: practicing
Error: definetly Suggestion: definitely
flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 4 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 7 2
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 23 in 30
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 4 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 7 2
No. of Sentences: 14 15
No. of Words: 454 350
No. of Characters: 2234 1500
No. of Different Words: 222 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.616 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.921 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.573 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 166 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 115 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 79 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 50 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 32.429 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 16.291 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.857 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.38 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.611 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.124 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 453, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...same way like study classes and research and reading libraries for obvious reason...
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Line 1, column 502, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ding libraries for obvious reasons that i will mention in this essay. First, s...
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Line 3, column 99, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...sychological and biological health in a persons life. The students who practice any kin...
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Line 3, column 265, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ou will notice they are better in health , have high fitness and proper growth. Al...
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Line 3, column 305, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
... , have high fitness and proper growth. Also those girls and boys with social activi...
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Line 8, column 123, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
...s and social meetings and organizations thats a kind of protection for those kids and...
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Line 8, column 465, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...t in any activities or social practicing . So supporting these fields by the gover...
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Line 10, column 116, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'suggest getting'.
Suggestion: suggest getting
... and social for all the students, and I suggest to get extra credits for practising regularly ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, so, third, well, while, for example, i mean, kind of, in the same way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 38.0 13.8261648746 275% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2282.0 1977.66487455 115% => OK
No of words: 454.0 407.700716846 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02643171806 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61598047577 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61879570625 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 228.0 212.727598566 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.502202643172 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 703.8 618.680645161 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.94265232975 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => OK
Sentence length: 32.0 20.1344086022 159% => OK
Sentence length SD: 91.2816900521 48.9658058833 186% => OK
Chars per sentence: 163.0 100.406767564 162% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.4285714286 20.6045352989 157% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.21428571429 5.45110844103 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 112% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192083892229 0.236089414692 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0836064023195 0.076458572812 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0349210005893 0.0737576698707 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0992090981173 0.150856017488 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0606363516396 0.0645574589148 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.5 11.7677419355 157% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.0 58.1214874552 67% => It means the essay is relatively harder to read.
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 10.1575268817 156% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.49 10.9000537634 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 86.8835125448 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 10.002688172 150% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.0537634409 147% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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