Truth is always beneficial. Telling the truth is beneficial for everybody or not?this is the question.I always taught that I can not tell lies and truth is much better for me. Now when I become older I saw in different lives around me when people tell the truth they live happier with less damage so I strongly believe that it is easier for us to always tell the truth as normal/routine people.
First of all, human being always grown up by the truth and everything is beside it. For example, kid does not know how to lie. When he/she is four years old he/she learn. Depending on the family it grows in a child or not. For us as a human telling lie is some extra thing that nowadays is so popular. The theft and rubberry start from lies in their childhood.
Moreover, there is extra thing nowadays as white lie. I agree with it. Because for example if I can tell the lie in order to immigrate to another country I will because it will help me and my children. There is a reason behind this kind of lie that is good. If the lying to another person makes him in trouble I will not lie in any circumstance.
Furthermore, politicians are the people who always have to lie and it make sense they have to lie to support their countries. Even Brack Obama has to lie in order to help his people,soldiers, to evacuate Iraq and live peacefully. I think that they lie because so many taught is behind that from different ministers and Parliment members and they do not get to this decision by themselves.
In summary, I strongly believe that we should always tell the truth, however in some circumstances it is normal to tell white lie which means in favour of some advantages for some people.
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Essay evaluation report
human being always grown up by the truth
human being are always grown up by the truth
For example, kid does not know
For example, a kid does not know
and it make sense
and it makes sense
so many taught is behind
so many thoughts are behind
Sentence: The theft and rubberry start from lies in their childhood.
Error: rubberry Suggestion: No alternate word
flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 4 2
No. of Different Words: 157 200
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 20 in 30
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 4 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 1 2
No. of Sentences: 18 15
No. of Words: 317 350
No. of Characters: 1337 1500
No. of Different Words: 157 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.22 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.218 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.28 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 78 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 50 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 30 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 19 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 17.611 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 10.21 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.611 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.314 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.547 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.14 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 103, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...r everybody or not?this is the question.I always taught that I can not tell lies ...
^
Line 3, column 128, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... example, kid does not know how to lie. When he/she is four years old he/she learn. ...
^^^^
Line 3, column 165, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'learns'.
Suggestion: learns
...e. When he/she is four years old he/she learn. Depending on the family it grows in a ...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 259, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...n behind this kind of lie that is good. If the lying to another person makes him i...
^^
Line 7, column 71, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'makes'?
Suggestion: makes
...he people who always have to lie and it make sense they have to lie to support their...
^^^^
Line 7, column 182, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , soldiers
...a has to lie in order to help his people,soldiers, to evacuate Iraq and live peacefully. ...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 329, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t from different ministers and Parliment members and they do not get to this deci...
^^
Discourse Markers used:
['first', 'furthermore', 'however', 'if', 'moreover', 'so', 'as to', 'for example', 'i think', 'in summary', 'kind of', 'first of all']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.194117647059 0.229887763892 84% => OK
Verbs: 0.173529411765 0.158761421928 109% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0676470588235 0.0866891130778 78% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0676470588235 0.046263068375 146% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0970588235294 0.0685040099705 142% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.123529411765 0.118717715034 104% => OK
Participles: 0.0147058823529 0.0351676179071 42% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.52610771954 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0382352941176 0.0309702414327 123% => OK
Particles: 0.00294117647059 0.00188951952338 156% => OK
Determiners: 0.0764705882353 0.0887237588012 86% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0176470588235 0.0209618222197 84% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0235294117647 0.0139019557991 169% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1691.0 2387.08602151 71% => OK
No of words: 311.0 408.028673835 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43729903537 5.86048508987 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.48200974243 94% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.260450160772 0.338922669872 77% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.170418006431 0.251872472559 68% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.112540192926 0.174417080927 65% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0771704180064 0.112833075102 68% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52610771954 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 212.727598566 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.501607717042 0.524397521467 96% => OK
Word variations: 50.5666807348 59.2087087015 85% => OK
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6684587814 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.2777777778 20.5533526081 84% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.7763390695 48.84282405 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.9444444444 120.699889404 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2777777778 20.5533526081 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.666666666667 0.644075263715 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.54480286738 126% => OK
Readability: 34.3195784209 45.7405998639 75% => OK
Elegance: 0.982608695652 1.45489161554 68% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.296397989645 0.300154397459 99% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0846012706447 0.103427244359 82% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.122149290977 0.0752933317313 162% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.51858202692 0.497263757937 104% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.206542026005 0.151897553556 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.1155542733 0.114077575197 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0598266024956 0.0781384742642 77% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.307770379785 0.336927656856 91% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0790606121322 0.067059652881 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193691187024 0.210909579961 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0438770694093 0.0618886996521 71% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8870967742 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.86379928315 52% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.91756272401 102% => OK
Positive topic words: 8.0 8.42114695341 95% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.4623655914 41% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.75985663082 36% => OK
Total topic words: 10.0 13.6433691756 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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