TPO-02 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

I strongly agree with the statement. In my own opinion the most important consideration in all relationship is the truth. The truth is an important value for every person; an affective relation cannot survive without emotional security; the infidelities, failures and lost of confidence will finally brake up the strongest relation.

Firstly, could be a long relation if the people are sincere each other. Over time the relationship wears when not all goes well. For example, there are couples, which can forgive an infidelity, in fact almost, forget it, but if the lover fail again to his/her couple maybe wont be a second opportunity, and they brake up. Aside from this it not only could affect the couple even though the member in the family, if this was formed yet. Consequently, the hurt is for everyone, kids can be really affected by the break up of parents.

Secondly, rancor is occasioned when a relationship have passed through a desilucion. The connection between both could suddenly be breaking as a result. Despite, a couple that really loves can find the way to overcome, almost everything the suffering is unnecessary. According my point of view, before to provoke or invent a lie, you must analyze all the result as possible. In the normal course of events you can be forgiven, nevertheless the people never hurt who love, whatever the reason.

Finally, lie really is treason. People who really love you will not betray your trust. Who really love does not lies. The couple must to questioning if wants to hurt and at the same time give love. This is not possible, generally we want to protect our girlfriend/boyfriend against pain, and this is the true love. Maybe in a relationship can go through a lot of things, as financial problems, disease, but the principal reasons that relationship prosper is done telling the truth.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 88, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Who” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ly love you will not betray your trust. Who really love does not lies. The couple m...
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Line 9, column 113, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[3]
Message: The verb 'does' requires base form of the verb: 'lie'
Suggestion: lie
...ay your trust. Who really love does not lies. The couple must to questioning if want...
^^^^

Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'consequently', 'finally', 'first', 'firstly', 'if', 'may', 'nevertheless', 'really', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'well', 'as for', 'for example', 'in fact', 'as a result']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.196078431373 0.229887763892 85% => OK
Verbs: 0.156862745098 0.158761421928 99% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0532212885154 0.0866891130778 61% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0924369747899 0.046263068375 200% => Less adverbs wanted.
Pronouns: 0.0336134453782 0.0685040099705 49% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0980392156863 0.118717715034 83% => OK
Participles: 0.03081232493 0.0351676179071 88% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.85435661069 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0168067226891 0.0309702414327 54% => OK
Particles: 0.00560224089636 0.00188951952338 296% => OK
Determiners: 0.131652661064 0.0887237588012 148% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0364145658263 0.0209618222197 174% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0252100840336 0.0139019557991 181% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1854.0 2387.08602151 78% => OK
No of words: 311.0 408.028673835 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.961414791 5.86048508987 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.48200974243 94% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.35691318328 0.338922669872 105% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.250803858521 0.251872472559 100% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.176848874598 0.174417080927 101% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.12540192926 0.112833075102 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85435661069 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.607717041801 0.524397521467 116% => OK
Word variations: 68.9790691903 59.2087087015 117% => OK
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6684587814 92% => OK
Sentence length: 16.3684210526 20.5533526081 80% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.4841534276 48.84282405 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.5789473684 120.699889404 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3684210526 20.5533526081 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.894736842105 0.644075263715 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.54480286738 36% => OK
Readability: 41.4488069047 45.7405998639 91% => OK
Elegance: 1.14851485149 1.45489161554 79% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.396211113143 0.300154397459 132% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.08156191704 0.103427244359 79% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0853266341114 0.0752933317313 113% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.473540555041 0.497263757937 95% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.135820685232 0.151897553556 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.145735504986 0.114077575197 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0852893521509 0.0781384742642 109% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.379729396468 0.336927656856 113% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0158694963741 0.067059652881 24% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.280402765486 0.210909579961 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0539567498712 0.0618886996521 87% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8870967742 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.86379928315 129% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.91756272401 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 9.0 8.42114695341 107% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.4623655914 41% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.75985663082 36% => OK
Total topic words: 11.0 13.6433691756 81% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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