The Internet has influenced our lives in a lot of ways. In my own experience, has made my life more comfortable than before the Internet develop. For instance, through tools, let us do some task quickly, some devices are common to use it more than one use. The Internet on cell phone has a lot of advantages, not only I can speak besides, I can check e-mail, be in touch with friends through social networks as Facebook, twitter, and so fort.
Nowadays has produced better quality of learning for students and thus, the knowledge is improving as same time that the internet is growing. One such example is, when I need to find information faster, do homework or researches, eventually with the use of the Internet time spent is low. Nevertheless, we do not need to read every book all day, is enough click and the information is found with an unbelievable velocity.
The Internet has given advances in science and medicine subject. Thanks to the access to information, Scientifics around the world read scientific journals, and as same time they write about theirs discovers. In addition, they can work and to collaborate with other experts in the same major, maybe in a country that even they never have visited. Furthermore, they know what happen around the world, for example, if there is an epidemic or an estrange disease, they discuss about the topic and feedback each other; this is a great achievement in science.
Finally, for all the said before, I consider effectively that the Internet has given people access to information on a level experienced before. Is universally acknowledged how to use this tool in the majority of the society. One of the most striking Internet features is the availability to access to the information without barriers, for the simple reason that does no matter the culture or language from the people, currently the internet is universal
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 442, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...for example, if there is an epidemic or an estrange disease, they discuss about the topic a...
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Discourse Markers used:
['besides', 'finally', 'furthermore', 'if', 'may', 'nevertheless', 'so', 'thus', 'for example', 'for instance', 'in addition']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.232686980609 0.229887763892 101% => OK
Verbs: 0.149584487535 0.158761421928 94% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0775623268698 0.0866891130778 89% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0526315789474 0.046263068375 114% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0415512465374 0.0685040099705 61% => OK
Prepositions: 0.127423822715 0.118717715034 107% => OK
Participles: 0.0332409972299 0.0351676179071 95% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.782013589 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0277008310249 0.0309702414327 89% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.113573407202 0.0887237588012 128% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00831024930748 0.0209618222197 40% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0138504155125 0.0139019557991 100% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1887.0 2387.08602151 79% => OK
No of words: 320.0 408.028673835 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.896875 5.86048508987 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.48200974243 94% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.3375 0.338922669872 100% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.271875 0.251872472559 108% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.221875 0.174417080927 127% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.10625 0.112833075102 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.782013589 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.584375 0.524397521467 111% => OK
Word variations: 64.7787418126 59.2087087015 109% => OK
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6684587814 68% => OK
Sentence length: 22.8571428571 20.5533526081 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.1316951609 48.84282405 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.785714286 120.699889404 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8571428571 20.5533526081 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.785714285714 0.644075263715 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.54480286738 18% => OK
Readability: 50.0446428571 45.7405998639 109% => OK
Elegance: 1.61363636364 1.45489161554 111% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210415919693 0.300154397459 70% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.117234249491 0.103427244359 113% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0676074268607 0.0752933317313 90% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.597876183117 0.497263757937 120% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.124908840643 0.151897553556 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0929648578333 0.114077575197 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0444678302966 0.0781384742642 57% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.297252441734 0.336927656856 88% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0694089108549 0.067059652881 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144097438921 0.210909579961 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0207704926647 0.0618886996521 34% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8870967742 59% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.86379928315 52% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.91756272401 102% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 8.42114695341 71% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.4623655914 81% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 2.75985663082 145% => OK
Total topic words: 12.0 13.6433691756 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.