I agree that always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people. This is because of the following reasons.
To begin with,always telling the truth positively binds relationships.Being truthful always creates the atmosphere of trust in any relationship. For example,my friend always telling the truth no matter the circumstances will always earn my trust as a friend to not doubt but believe in what they say even when it might not be the whole truth yet still I choose to trust that particular friend whose always truthful thus the creation of a bond between us as friends.
Secondly, there is the presence of mutual respect in any relationship. People always telling the truth tend to have respect for each other because there is always joy or a positive energy of support in the relationship.For example, friends who are always truthful will ever be ready to fully support each other in any relationship without thinking twice as such sincerity in any relationship makes people respect each others views.
In conclusion, always telling the truth eradicates fear,saves time and gives peace.One whose always not truthful tends to live with the fear of getting caught or punished thus wasting more time to make up more lies which is not going to settle any situation whatsoever in any relationship nor the peace of mind to be themselves.For example, one who keeps boasting of riches or right over expensive material goods will have to keep up the act of being rich afraid that they might be found out thereby wasting more time into paying attention on how to continue with such untruthful act.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, second, secondly, so, still, thus, for example, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 43.0788530466 30% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1374.0 1977.66487455 69% => OK
No of words: 273.0 407.700716846 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03296703297 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.48103885553 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87910689816 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 212.727598566 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.549450549451 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 415.8 618.680645161 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 20.6003584229 34% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 39.0 20.1344086022 194% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 182.689320309 48.9658058833 373% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 196.285714286 100.406767564 195% => OK
Words per sentence: 39.0 20.6045352989 189% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5714285714 5.45110844103 212% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273018574114 0.236089414692 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.17395303848 0.076458572812 228% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.137122584699 0.0737576698707 186% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.217603619963 0.150856017488 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.121848620828 0.0645574589148 189% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.8 11.7677419355 185% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.35 58.1214874552 69% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 10.1575268817 170% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.49 10.9000537634 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 86.8835125448 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.6 10.0537634409 175% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.247311828 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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