In every society either truth or lie is dealed among people.Some post in society have necessity of using lie, like political activities. Some peoples believe that in some cases telling the truth is not recomended because some times unimportant things can destroy relationship and and one or two lies can prevent it and it doesnt make bad consequences later. As far as i am concerned, telling the truth is the best way in relationship because not only does it improve the strength of relationship but also it provides a space that people can trust to each other.Furthermore truth can make society a better place with more output either in work or people's behaviour.
The first reason which should be stated is that truth make people to get close to each other. To begin with, when your partner knows that you always tell the truth to him/her, he/she feel comfortable to be with you and this feeling make relationship stronger than before.
Another point which deserve some words is that when people tell the truth to each other in every circumstances, after a period of time they realise that they can trust to each other and because of that they can tell every mystery of their life to their partner easier.
Furthermore, if people do not lie either in their relationship or at work, society become more healthy place and this help people to have better impact on thair future decision about their life. As an example when a president do not lie to his/her people, in future this country would not encounter to some problems and all the people help him to overcome the problem.
Since what are stated above it is recomended that telling the truth is better in all cases.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, so, in all cases, in some cases, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.0752688172 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1391.0 1977.66487455 70% => OK
No of words: 292.0 407.700716846 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76369863014 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53756493224 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 212.727598566 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.513698630137 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 618.680645161 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.59856630824 10% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 20.6003584229 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.1344086022 159% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.9118241391 48.9658058833 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 154.555555556 100.406767564 154% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.4444444444 20.6045352989 157% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 5.45110844103 165% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.5376344086 253% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14606067511 0.236089414692 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0688927864987 0.076458572812 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0419412674421 0.0737576698707 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0862403975586 0.150856017488 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0457319754395 0.0645574589148 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 11.7677419355 146% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.46 58.1214874552 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.1575268817 144% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.92 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 86.8835125448 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 10.002688172 200% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.0537634409 147% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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