Today we live in a society where people spend most of the time with each other. at the work, in the store, in the street. people wanted or unwanted have to have a simple relationship and some of this relationship continues for a long time like a friendship between students or employee at work or between two neighbors and so on.in all of these relationships, in my opinion, trust plays an important role in order to consist the relationship.in following It rendered reasons to support.
First and foremost, truth increase the trust between people in a relationship and they can rely on each other what would make this relationship closer and deeper. For instance, consider some employees who have to work as a team due to finish a specific project.at first that just a simple relationship which they have to be in it for a special reason. however when person try to show how truly they are and work with clearance and without any lie or hiding, it would change this simple relationship to the strongest one because they recognize each other as a person who is reliable to the group. therefore,they can trust each other and start talking about something which is secret in their life. hence, it shows that how truth can be important in continuing relationships.
Second, what isn't less important than the first one is that truth increase the imitation in a relationship what can affect all aspect of a simple relationship. for example, consider two family hat became each other's neighbor and don't have any familiarity with each other. first, they may talk about something about house, garden, and information which is needed to live there. if there is trust among this two neighbor talking, gradually this simple relationships would change in to the imitation one and they would start new version of this relationship because they know that any word which is transfer between them, is based on truth and they don't have any secret between each other and if any question asked, they know that none of them wouldn't hear any answer unless the truth one. what is valuable than this for relationships.
to summarize, truth not only makes the trust between members of relationships, but also it would be made it deeper and with more imitation what can continue these relationships more than 20 years. thus that true to say that the base of each relationship is the truth.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, may, second, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, talking about, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1943.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 407.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77395577396 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49157444576 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67366125835 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.471744471744 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 588.6 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.1344086022 154% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 120.150201855 48.9658058833 245% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 149.461538462 100.406767564 149% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.3076923077 20.6045352989 152% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.76923076923 5.45110844103 179% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 23.0 5.5376344086 415% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155851642285 0.236089414692 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0609773536621 0.076458572812 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0363860224209 0.0737576698707 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106997659077 0.150856017488 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0213373540911 0.0645574589148 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 11.7677419355 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.93 58.1214874552 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.1575268817 128% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.98 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 86.8835125448 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 10.002688172 185% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.0537634409 143% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.247311828 185% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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