The article talks about the companies try to receive a certificate which shows that these companies meet high ecological standards by conserving resources and recycling material.in this way states that American companies don't want to have this certificate and bring three reasons of support. however, the professor opposes this idea by rejects the article's reasons.
First, the reading passage claims that American companies don't want to have this certificate because they don't care about such this advertising. while the professor in contrary said that American consumers don't treat all the advertisement the same. he continues that by receiving this certificate, the consumers would react differently and would be motivated to buy this product.
Second, the essay states that by receiving this certificate the price of products is going to be increased. therefore, consumers won't buy them. the professor on the other side explains that although people prefer to buy a cheap one they care about the price when some product of other companies become cheaper than the main one. American people care about the preservation and protection of the environment.hence, they buy the product which has this certificate even it is more expensive than the product without it.
Third, the reading said that this certificate doesn't have any benefit to absorb foreign consumers, however, the professor said that even though that's might be correct, but other foreign competitor companies can absorb American consumer attention then spread through the country. thus it's necessary for American companies to have this certificate.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: don't
...this way states that American companies dont want to have this certificate and bring...
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Suggestion: However
...ate and bring three reasons of support. however, the professor opposes this idea by rej...
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Suggestion: don't
... passage claims that American companies dont want to have this certificate because t...
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Suggestion: don't
...t to have this certificate because they dont care about such this advertising. while...
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Suggestion: While
... dont care about such this advertising. while the professor in contrary said that Ame...
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Message: “while” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... dont care about such this advertising. while the professor in contrary said that Ame...
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Suggestion: don't
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Suggestion: He
...t treat all the advertisement the same. he continues that by receiving this certif...
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Suggestion: doesn't
... the reading said that this certificate doesnt have any benefit to absorb foreign cons...
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Suggestion: that's
...er, the professor said that even though thats might be correct, but other foreign com...
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Suggestion: Thus
...ention then spread through the country. thus its necessary for American companies to...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: thus,
...ention then spread through the country. thus its necessary for American companies to...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, however, if, second, so, then, therefore, third, thus, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 10.4613686534 48% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 5.04856512141 79% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 7.30242825607 68% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 12.0772626932 99% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 22.412803532 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 30.3222958057 82% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.01324503311 100% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1373.0 1373.03311258 100% => OK
No of words: 249.0 270.72406181 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.5140562249 5.08290768461 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 4.04702891845 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80558811233 2.5805825403 109% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 145.348785872 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.538152610442 0.540411800872 100% => OK
syllable_count: 420.3 419.366225166 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.55342163355 109% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 13.0662251656 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 21.2450331126 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 79.2524995043 49.2860985944 161% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.818181818 110.228320801 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6363636364 21.698381199 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.18181818182 7.06452816374 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 4.19205298013 334% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15155491786 0.272083759551 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0639632292393 0.0996497079465 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0692623324998 0.0662205650399 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106433613017 0.162205337803 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.048446880085 0.0443174109184 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.3589403974 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 53.8541721854 76% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 5.55761589404 202% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.0289183223 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.97 12.2367328918 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.42419426049 96% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 63.6247240618 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.7273730684 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.498013245 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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