Some people states that telling the truth is so of vital importance that we need to obey it in any relationship. They may consider that telling the truth is helpful to build the trust with each other and then the information could be transferred efficiently. However, I think it is not necessarily to tell the truth in any kinds of situation, due to the reason of protecting the commercial secrets or the lives of individuals.
To begin with, in the commercial situation, the most important consideration is the privatation of the company's information. For example, if one of your friends belongs to the rival of your company's, on the table, you cannot tell him all the truths like what's the next plannation plan is. Maybe he creates a stable relationship with you, but you present your company and you have the responsibility to protect the company's information. As this example aptly illustrated, there are also some situations that telling the truth is not the most important consideration.
Furthermore, except the commercial situation, if you meet some bad guys who are likely to hurt other peroson, you also cannot tell the truth. Take one "crazy" worker in DiDi company as an example. Just not long before, one woman sent help message to this worker when someone wanted to hurt the former. However, the worker called that bad person to make sure the situation. Then, the bad person killed the woman who asked the worker for help. In this case, what let the worker made such unbelievable behavior is the belief that she must tell the truth for anybody. But when we want to obey such rule, how can we forget other's situation!
In conclusion, as what have been pointed out, it is true that we need to tell the truth to make a stable relationship or to make the conversation continue; although, there are also some situation like facing the commercial challenge or meeting the dander, that we cannot tell the truth. It's always necessary to think twice if it's fine to do this.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 255, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: what's
...you cannot tell him all the truths like whats the next plannation plan is. Maybe he c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, may, so, then, for example, i think, in conclusion, it is true, to begin with, to tell the truth
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1671.0 1977.66487455 84% => OK
No of words: 343.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87172011662 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88567004403 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.533527696793 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 515.7 618.680645161 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.3001719753 48.9658058833 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.4 100.406767564 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8666666667 20.6045352989 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.86666666667 5.45110844103 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214213591504 0.236089414692 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0755990032337 0.076458572812 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0554967651468 0.0737576698707 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142080019934 0.150856017488 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0731481723156 0.0645574589148 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 86.8835125448 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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