i agree with that statement which is about the truth. its stats that telling the truth is the most amazing heed in any relationship among the people. i strongly feel this way for two main reasons. first the truth represents the honesty of people against posit gender and also against the term relationship. in addition,telling the truth indicates the relationship either would stay for a long period of time or up to the end between two people.
To begin with, honesty it determine the relationship's bond that how much the relation strong is. and how long it would stay safe between people.the truth in a relationship increase the value of people against each other. for instance, last year my college mate were in relation with our classmate.they begun talking to each other. in the start of their relation they were in good moods for each other. after few months an issue took place between them. those two guys continuously did strive to solve that problem which was about the non honesty of female. but he was not well to stay in touch with her anymore.
in addition, as we all know once a person become raw in a relationship the trust would not get rise again on him and people will not trust on him anymore. ancestors says, a raw apple once fallen from tree it would never baked.for example, my both classmates once the guy decided to end the relationship with his friend the girl started repairing again their relationship but she could not be able to do that. because i mentioned earlier once a person became fail in relation the trust would never get rise again.
to sum up, the strong relationship required to a great positive mind and also needs for honesty.because of two main reasons first, people would carry readily the relationship rules.secondly, positive mind would help the relation to stay long for the time.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, second, secondly, so, well, for example, for instance, in addition, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1517.0 1977.66487455 77% => OK
No of words: 319.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75548589342 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68265305092 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548589341693 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 618.680645161 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.4137797546 48.9658058833 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.8125 100.406767564 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9375 20.6045352989 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.875 5.45110844103 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 5.5376344086 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14754529529 0.236089414692 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.058789526424 0.076458572812 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0628019996877 0.0737576698707 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0953602561058 0.150856017488 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0674466684257 0.0645574589148 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.86 8.01818996416 86% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 86.8835125448 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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