Most people suggests that perform tasks on splendid ways, which in the future give you lots of benefits is significantly valuable. Interestingly, everyone has their own perspective regarding what should they do to carryout multitasks in an accurate way. It feels great to work on mind while doing something rather than perform works in wrong ways. It highly debatable topic which talks about it is crucial for people to start with velocity, without focusing, out of think regarding works while they wants to do. However, personally I disagree because of plentiful justify reasons. which i will mention in the following essay.
First of all, work without thinking means you are not sensible about life. However, some tasks are tricky that require much efforts to be done on contrary, some works required person's fast steps. Great moment will cross your life when you done tasks successfully without hesitation and velocity. My own experience is compelling of an example. whenever, I wanted to do study in high school, I always used to do with great patience. After one year, I registered my self as a university school. At first, I do not paid attention on lessons that confronted, I always thought university lessons are easy. The day of exams came though my preparation was not good, I decided to cover all subjects in one day. But, I were not be able to finish all my lessons under a day. I failed ever and realized, I should not take decisions that confronted me to many conflicts in order to make the life tough. After that, I started again the same routine, which i carried out in the school.
Second, hurrying about tasks or works will increase the rate of risks in people life. in spite of the facts, every one knows that life has lots of circumstances plus risks so, successful people are those whom, which reduce the risk's range in their life. In this point of view, people should try to eliminate the causes of risks regarding works in various places namely, office, school, university and so many other places. For instances, my friend wanted to go abroad for picnic. I already informed him about exams that they are on the way. He told me that, he will turn soon before exams. But this not happened, his fast decision was the only cause of his failure. Perhaps, he became hopeless due to performed work in a wrong way without think.
Taking all as consideration, successful people always use their mind regarding some works when they wants to complete it. However, tasks may be difficult to do or may wants huge efforts it does not mean that select wrong way for performing. Although, success depends on many factors. I believe, choose a good way and work without hurry should be consider at first.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider replacing "in an accurate way" with adverb for "accurate"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
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...od way and work without hurry should be consider at first.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, regarding, second, so, while, for instance, first of all, in spite of, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 56.0 43.0788530466 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 69.0 52.1666666667 132% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2244.0 1977.66487455 113% => OK
No of words: 470.0 407.700716846 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77446808511 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65612321451 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52363746187 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 253.0 212.727598566 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53829787234 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 687.6 618.680645161 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 20.0 9.59856630824 208% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 20.6003584229 141% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.943045183 48.9658058833 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.3793103448 100.406767564 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2068965517 20.6045352989 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.93103448276 5.45110844103 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.5376344086 307% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155122204724 0.236089414692 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0396944661054 0.076458572812 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0361607183018 0.0737576698707 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0992584710796 0.150856017488 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0311203903312 0.0645574589148 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 11.7677419355 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.09 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 86.8835125448 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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