TPO-02 - Independent Writing Task
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Being an honest individual often serves as benefits to the person's involved in. Many people are having hard time to give their trust in one's relationship. In my opinion, telling the truth in any relationship will bound for many positive outcome. I feel this way for two main reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, not lying to your partner or loved ones will result in harmonious relationship, thus, a trusting and loving environment can happened. My own experience is a compelling example of this. I was in a relationship with my partner for 3 years, he is suspecting that I was having an affair with other man, but, I become honest to him that I was not cheating on him and showed him I cared and loved him. Additionally, He trusted me that I am telling the truth and I was not lying to him, hence, our relationship further grows and blossomed due to we have trust in our relationship. This chapter in our lives strengthen our bond as partner and test our relationship, to be more open and be truthful in each other. For this reason, I strongly believed that it is utmost important to center honesty in one's relationship to reap trust in each other.
Secondly, telling the truth will always set you free. It is not easy to be honest all the time, I myself have the difficulty divulging honesty in every word I say, thus, my soul and spirits was being uplifted when I avoid lying to people around me. For instance, I was on my sophomore year that time, my mother approached me because she caught me smoking. I first lied to her that it was not me that was smoking, but it was my brother. Moreover, I became guilty and mad at myself for not telling the truth with my mother, but, one day I admitted that it was me who was smoking at our garage. I felt happy and guilt free for telling my mom the truth, hence, she talked to me that it has no good effects on my health, rather, it will cause harmful toxins that will stayed on my lungs. Finally, she enrolled me to the addiction program in our community, I overcome my addiction in smoking. Accordingly, I think I could have not stopped smoking without telling my mom the truth.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that always telling the truth has advantage in dealing with relationships. This is because being truthful will earn trust and respect in people, and you will feel good about yourself.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 137, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...having hard time to give their trust in ones relationship. In my opinion, telling th...
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Line 3, column 806, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...s utmost important to center honesty in ones relationship to reap trust in each othe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, finally, first, hence, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, thus, for instance, i feel, i think, in conclusion, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 92.0 43.0788530466 214% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1953.0 1977.66487455 99% => OK
No of words: 433.0 407.700716846 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.5103926097 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56165014514 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63048397464 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.487297921478 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 594.0 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 24.0 9.59856630824 250% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.3088544449 48.9658058833 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.65 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.65 20.6045352989 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.1 5.45110844103 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129448415693 0.236089414692 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0521080020458 0.076458572812 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0461406051907 0.0737576698707 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0979868159528 0.150856017488 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.030809193674 0.0645574589148 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 11.7677419355 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.88 10.9000537634 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 86.8835125448 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.