Human kind is a extreamly social being. Human seek connection in every stages of life, which makes tham to find friends and share their thoughts among others. Friendship is important part of life which should be cherished in every way possible. In every stage of life people gathers new friend, some of them grow old and old enough to sustains for the whole life. And I do honor these long friendships and prefer to keep my old friends than to make new ones.
To begin with, with time friends know each other deeply which make them to participate in any group activity and enjoy the event whole heartedly. This may not be possible with friends you know for just few months as you actually don't know them properly like where they actually love to tour or even what the like to eat. Every bit of similarity among friends is important, which actually ties them up together. Starting from the university life, we are six friends who passed a lot of time together and experienced number of events. This way we have come to know each other very well. Just for example in or group two of them like visiting mountains and the rest are craved for sea beaches. Knowing everyone's choice helped us to make the last trip plan which was to Coxs' Bazar the largest sea beach of the world guarded by small mountains. All of us enjoyed the beach as well as the hiking. And the individuals helped with their knowledge in these particular activities. And this experince showed me how old friends make a group activity a lot easier and enjoyable.
Secondly, in any relationship as well as in friendship an important aspect is trust, which obviously comes with time. In our lives we go through multiple scenarios some them are critical. During these times people seek support from their near ones. Some of them are very private and may be sharable to only very close family members but I have experienced few where my friends supported me tremendously to pass those hard times. After my graduation I was interviewed for a job where they were using completely new technology which I did not know of. Fortunately I found one of close friends joined there three months back. We used to do our class group activities together. Hence he knew me and my skills very well, he referred me to his team lead and helped me to cope up with this challenges and till now after eight years we are working on the same team and always discuss any official issues and try to solve them together. This way I came to know how important is to have old friends in real life situations like professional career.
In conclusion, in the course of life everyone come to know new friends and share their life whith them but old friends are your deep root who knows you very well when required will support you strongly. And this justifies my preference
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- TPO-06 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 70
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Universities should give the same amount of money to their students’ sports activities as they give to their university libraries. 86
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Television has destroyed communication among friends and family. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion. 70
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 15, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
Human kind is a extreamly social being. Human seek conn...
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Line 3, column 230, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...now for just few months as you actually dont know them properly like where they actu...
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Line 5, column 675, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...do our class group activities together. Hence he knew me and my skills very well, he ...
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Line 5, column 779, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...team lead and helped me to cope up with this challenges and till now after eight yea...
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Discourse Markers used:
['actually', 'but', 'hence', 'if', 'may', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'well', 'as to', 'for example', 'in conclusion', 'you know', 'as well as', 'to begin with']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.222014925373 0.229887763892 97% => OK
Verbs: 0.158582089552 0.158761421928 100% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0876865671642 0.0866891130778 101% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0671641791045 0.046263068375 145% => OK
Pronouns: 0.089552238806 0.0685040099705 131% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.102611940299 0.118717715034 86% => OK
Participles: 0.0261194029851 0.0351676179071 74% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.39790335025 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0373134328358 0.0309702414327 120% => OK
Particles: 0.00373134328358 0.00188951952338 197% => OK
Determiners: 0.0783582089552 0.0887237588012 88% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00746268656716 0.0209618222197 36% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0298507462687 0.0139019557991 215% => Maybe 'Which' is overused. If other WH_determiners like 'Who, What, Whom, Whose...' are used too in sentences, then there are no issues.
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2808.0 2387.08602151 118% => OK
No of words: 502.0 408.028673835 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.59362549801 5.86048508987 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.7334296765 4.48200974243 106% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.254980079681 0.338922669872 75% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.195219123506 0.251872472559 78% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.135458167331 0.174417080927 78% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.097609561753 0.112833075102 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39790335025 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 256.0 212.727598566 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.509960159363 0.524397521467 97% => OK
Word variations: 60.4805666548 59.2087087015 102% => OK
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6684587814 126% => OK
Sentence length: 19.3076923077 20.5533526081 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.089988135 48.84282405 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.0 120.699889404 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3076923077 20.5533526081 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.576923076923 0.644075263715 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.54480286738 72% => OK
Readability: 38.8296046583 45.7405998639 85% => OK
Elegance: 1.1124260355 1.45489161554 76% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.312776703612 0.300154397459 104% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.093670815685 0.103427244359 91% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0686645865357 0.0752933317313 91% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.392215788433 0.497263757937 79% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.173973734775 0.151897553556 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101621307834 0.114077575197 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0733728092077 0.0781384742642 94% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.385239372478 0.336927656856 114% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0631327556473 0.067059652881 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.229365941739 0.210909579961 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0181840001603 0.0618886996521 29% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 11.8870967742 168% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.86379928315 26% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.91756272401 102% => OK
Positive topic words: 18.0 8.42114695341 214% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.4623655914 41% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 2.75985663082 145% => OK
Total topic words: 23.0 13.6433691756 169% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.