In my view, I believe that we have to make many friends as many as we can. Therefore we are not afraid of losing our old friends.
First of all, I think that we have to be familiar with new peoples as well as try to know them. This knowing can lead to a valuable friendship. By finding new people, we will be acquainted with new opinions and new experiences. For example, My close friend David and me, we have found each other in the library. I was studying my favorite subjects, engineering topics, while he was reading sports newspapers. I remember, he need a pencil then came near me and said that if I have a pencil. I have lent him a pencil and our friendship begun. I have talked to him about cutting edge technologies and he spoke with me about his favorite sport, soccer. Now, I have learnt many good aspects about sports especially soccer and he has been acquainted with modern technologies. That was a good experience.
Second, I believe that having the same friend for long time is a little boring. In addition, you lose the chance of being familiar with new experiences. Also, spending much time on old friendship is boring. Considering, you have to see the people every days, talk to them about repetitive subjects and topics so it is very dull. My father said to me that as I have experienced old friendship I do not recommend that to you. Due to the fact, that his old friend has deceived him and now this bad friend is escaping from the police.
Third, when we want to keep our old friends we have to comprise to them. However, I am not good at it so I prefer to leave them and make new friends and relax with the new ones. When I do not care about keeping my old friends I do not need to endure some difficulties which they may create for me. Then, I easily leave them and get rid of them. In addition, I have never got attached to someone because I do not try to keep my friendship.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Therefore,
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...not afraid of losing our old friends. First of all, I think that we have to be...
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...ve to see the people every days, talk to them about repetitive subjects and topic...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'second', 'so', 'then', 'therefore', 'third', 'well', 'while', 'for example', 'i think', 'in addition', 'as well as', 'first of all', 'in my view']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.1592039801 0.229887763892 69% => OK
Verbs: 0.203980099502 0.158761421928 128% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0870646766169 0.0866891130778 100% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0522388059701 0.046263068375 113% => OK
Pronouns: 0.149253731343 0.0685040099705 218% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.10447761194 0.118717715034 88% => OK
Participles: 0.0572139303483 0.0351676179071 163% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.50317262086 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0422885572139 0.0309702414327 137% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0497512437811 0.0887237588012 56% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00995024875622 0.0209618222197 47% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00746268656716 0.0139019557991 54% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1911.0 2387.08602151 80% => OK
No of words: 359.0 408.028673835 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32311977716 5.86048508987 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35284910392 4.48200974243 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.256267409471 0.338922669872 76% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.181058495822 0.251872472559 72% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.116991643454 0.174417080927 67% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0696378830084 0.112833075102 62% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50317262086 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 212.727598566 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.504178272981 0.524397521467 96% => OK
Word variations: 53.4312049537 59.2087087015 90% => OK
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6684587814 111% => OK
Sentence length: 15.6086956522 20.5533526081 76% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.7658498213 48.84282405 53% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.0869565217 120.699889404 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6086956522 20.5533526081 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.782608695652 0.644075263715 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.54480286738 126% => OK
Readability: 33.7145452343 45.7405998639 74% => OK
Elegance: 0.791411042945 1.45489161554 54% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.295127858491 0.300154397459 98% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0904654361221 0.103427244359 87% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0788691525611 0.0752933317313 105% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.427437106466 0.497263757937 86% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.139909313088 0.151897553556 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0967907780967 0.114077575197 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0719448413508 0.0781384742642 92% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.278776442952 0.336927656856 83% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0472894583557 0.067059652881 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202677127742 0.210909579961 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0832422215065 0.0618886996521 135% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8870967742 151% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.86379928315 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.91756272401 41% => OK
Positive topic words: 11.0 8.42114695341 131% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.4623655914 122% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.75985663082 72% => OK
Total topic words: 16.0 13.6433691756 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.