It is important to keep old friends than new friends because they say the "angel you know is better than the devil you don't know", old friends are already used to you, by their behavior and attitude towards issues. New friends are just getting used to you, in a long run there could be misunderstanding between you and the newly found friend.
A new friend could have a bad habit of stealing which you might not know of, you been a good friend can show hospitality by bringing him or her into your home for the first time, "there is always a first time to everything" and he has bad manners and lacks respect or he or she steals your property thinking it's cool.
Old friends know your rules and principles, they know where you're from and some might know your parents one way or the other. This brings more closeness within you and your old friend. limitations to certain things of dislike to both parties, in other words causing less quarrels and maybe fight between both parties.
New friends is also a lot of work to go through with, it is more like courtship before marriage.
It deals with a whole lot of understanding, patience and perseverance. Old friends take you through memory lane, all through the good, the bad and the ugly. There is respect and true expressions and feelings. It is better to be in a company of old friends than New devil called friend that is yet to be unleashed. The smaller your circle of old friends the lesser atrocities you commit.
- TPO-03 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?It is more important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 66
- TPO-01 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?At universities and colleges, sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support.Use specific reaso 76
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...l you know is better than the devil you dont know', old friends are already use...
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Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...etween you and the newly found friend. A new friend could have a bad habit of s...
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Line 3, column 62, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you're
...r rules and principles, they know where youre from and some might know your parents o...
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Line 3, column 186, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Limitations
...oseness within you and your old friend. limitations to certain things of dislike to both pa...
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Line 3, column 267, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun quarrels is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...to both parties, in other words causing less quarrels and maybe fight between both p...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... and maybe fight between both parties. New friends is also a lot of work to go ...
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Line 5, column 17, Rule ID: WHOLE_LOT[1]
Message: Use simply 'lot'.
Suggestion: lot
...tship before marriage. It deals with a whole lot of understanding, patience and persever...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, may, so, you know, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 52.1666666667 63% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1225.0 1977.66487455 62% => OK
No of words: 266.0 407.700716846 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.60526315789 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.48103885553 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57153024906 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 212.727598566 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56015037594 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 352.8 618.680645161 57% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 75.9763760798 48.9658058833 155% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.083333333 100.406767564 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1666666667 20.6045352989 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.83333333333 5.45110844103 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280055739119 0.236089414692 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112933000252 0.076458572812 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0714642909275 0.0737576698707 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161110994227 0.150856017488 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0409008535138 0.0645574589148 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 11.7677419355 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 74.53 58.1214874552 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 10.9000537634 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.22 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 86.8835125448 48% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 10.002688172 180% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
More content wanted.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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