The best aspect of such an industrial world is its unpredictable changes. Changes in means of transportation is no exception. There is a controversy among different people about whether the number of cars will increase in the future or not. Although technology always offers new means of transportation to individuals, it cannot diminish the number of cars in next twenty years. Some key factors including population growth and their resistance to change, as well as the transportation infrastructure related to cars, are utmost important reasons for this claim. Lines below shed more light on the issue put forward.
The first and foremost reason for the increase in the number of cars, within twenty years, is the population growth which is shown by statistics. The more people, the more demand for cars and the more cars on streets. On no account is it right that car is an urgent need for every family, even for those whose money is tight. Furthermore, statistics show that in some families, today, are more than two cars. Also, the number of cars that carry just one person is a growing concern. Other noteworthy statistics are about the age in which people start having their own cars; there is a dramatic fall, and, again, it increases the number of cars. As a result, it is not a case that in twenty years, the number of cars will decrease. Indeed, it will rise dramatically.
In addition, based on facts, people tend to resist changes. If technology offered a new means of transportation, it would take much time for people to adapt to it. As a case in point, imagine the situation in which a grandfather fears traveling by a fast train. Indeed, he would prefer to travel a long distant by a carriage because he resists change. A Persian proverb, perhaps, best describes this resistance; ‘’ people would fall ill if they broke a habit’’. As a result, this generation will not use a new means of transportation if technology offers it, and it takes more than twenty years for a new means of transportation to be as popular as current cars.
Last but not least, the transportation infrastructure is mostly for cars. There are many improvements in roads, tunnels, bridges, etc. and it seems that a new means of transportation will have some difficulties changing the status quo and dominating the world. These improvements lead people to use and have cars. Even if the next generation of means of transportation needs this infrastructure, that generation will not adapt to this infrastructure because it is specific for the current cars. Actually, it takes much time, more than twenty years, to modify and create its own infrastructure and it is not a case that will happen in the near future. Therefore, people would rather have these cars than use a new means of transportation without perfect infrastructure.
By taking all into account, it can wholeheartedly be alleged that the number of cars will not fall, in twenty years although this industrial world may offer new means of transportation to human being. This idea is fully guaranteed because of population increase, psychological reasons for change and good transportation infrastructure. Perhaps, the luxury automobile factories, each of which is worth more than billion of dollars, aim to create this growing demand for cars.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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... means of transportation, it would take many time for people to adapt to it. As a case in...
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...to travel a long distant by a carriage. Because he resists to change. A Persian proverb...
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...or the current cars. Actually, it takes many time, more than twenty years, to modify and ...
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...to create this growing demand for cars.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, furthermore, if, may, so, therefore, well, in addition, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 67.0 52.1666666667 128% => OK
Nominalization: 23.0 8.0752688172 285% => Less nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2775.0 1977.66487455 140% => OK
No of words: 557.0 407.700716846 137% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98204667864 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.85807034144 4.48103885553 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09024382996 2.67179642975 116% => OK
Unique words: 243.0 212.727598566 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.436265709156 0.524837075471 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 843.3 618.680645161 136% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 9.0 3.08781362007 291% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 31.0 20.6003584229 150% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.4044485017 48.9658058833 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.5161290323 100.406767564 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9677419355 20.6045352989 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.45161290323 5.45110844103 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112270793389 0.236089414692 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.033305279008 0.076458572812 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0343989019384 0.0737576698707 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.073518116479 0.150856017488 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0173211710428 0.0645574589148 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 11.7677419355 93% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.4 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 86.8835125448 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Try to use less pronouns (like 'It, I, They, We, You...') as the subject of a sentence.
Write the essay in 30 minutes. We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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