We are living in the twentieth century the modern era which has witnessed various changes in the field of science and technology . One of the prominent changes that most people would be looking forward to would be the change in the means of transportation . In my view , I believe that there would not be reduction in the number of cars in the future. I would like to put forward examples that support my decision .
In this busy and fast developing world, each and every person needs to be a step ahead of the other. Car is one such invention of technology that has made our lives easier and is an item of luxury. Having a car is a necessity in todays’ fast developing world. Furthermore, travelling by car helps to save a lot of time and energy as compared to travelling by public transportation. For instance : I read an article in the Times of India which described the state of public transport and how inconvenient they were to travel. The article laid emphasis on the travelling conditions of the metro. The article clearly stated that the metro is over-crowded because of which people have to keep standing until they reach their destination. Standing in the metro is dangerous and the person might lose balance and fall .
Hence metro is not a good option to travel .
In addition to this, using other public means of transport –buses , car pools and trains even though , more economical is not a reliable option. Buses have specific routes and to reach the desired destination a lot of buses may have to be changed which may consume a lot time. Car pools require a lot of adjustments according to the needs of the members. Trains have no fixed timings of arrival and departure. The inconvenience caused can be explained using the following example: My father does not use public transport to go to his office because it is not a reliable option. He finds it to be a really tiresome and time –consuming process. He used to initially travel by bus and mostly reached late to the office. Furthermore, he used to get tired changing buses at every stop. As a result, he started travelling by car and made it to office on time . Hence, travelling by a private vehicles is a better option than travelling by public transport.
Based on the examples furnished, I personally think that in twenty years there would be no reduction in the number of private cars. Moreover, people would resort to private vehicles to travel rather than using any other means of transportation due to the ease and comfort.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, hence, if, look, may, moreover, really, so, for instance, in addition, as a result, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 66.0 52.1666666667 127% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2075.0 1977.66487455 105% => OK
No of words: 439.0 407.700716846 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72665148064 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57737117129 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75056130131 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.487471526196 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 659.7 618.680645161 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.2119511282 48.9658058833 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.0 100.406767564 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.56 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.28 5.45110844103 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.5376344086 217% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120025087365 0.236089414692 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.035316091403 0.076458572812 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.030188139803 0.0737576698707 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0635352433088 0.150856017488 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0389389323656 0.0645574589148 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 86.8835125448 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.