It may not be evident that people may reduce the usage of cars in the coming future, however I agree with the statement ' In twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today' for reasons such as health consciousness of the people and issues of global warming and climate change.
With the widespread use of Internet and exchange of knowledge across the globe, people are becoming more health conscious than they were ten to fifty years ago.Nowadays, workout videos and health tips are the most searched topics trending on the Internet with people more interested in living longer than their predecessors. As a result, people are more aware of the effects of inhaling smoke from combustible cars to the human body especially when in traffics or crowded environment. This further explains why most people usually use bicycles to move to and fro places in close proximity,and as the utilization of Internet increases, so do people eradicate the use of cars for their day to day movements.
Moreover, the world is struggling with the issues of global warming and climate change as it literally changes the weather and slowly affects the ecosystem.Due to the combustion of cars, CO (carbon monoxide) goes up in the air and destroys the ozone layer with protects us from the sun's ultra violet rays which affects ice especially in the Antarctic and Arctic regions.This ice melts, releases and spreads many unknown diseases which causes an epidemic outbreak in the world.Government is collaborating with scientists and engineers to create electric non- combustible vehicles and annihilate combustible cars and so far have introduced few prototypes into the world.As this continues ,in less than twenty years , few cars would be available and global warming would have ceased.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, moreover, so, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 43.0788530466 26% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1491.0 1977.66487455 75% => OK
No of words: 292.0 407.700716846 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10616438356 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79115791371 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578767123288 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 618.680645161 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 20.6003584229 24% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 58.0 20.1344086022 288% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 219.260028277 48.9658058833 448% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 298.2 100.406767564 297% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 58.4 20.6045352989 283% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 10.4 5.45110844103 191% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 14.0 5.5376344086 253% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 11.8709677419 17% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207987041165 0.236089414692 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111852613042 0.076458572812 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0904748262652 0.0737576698707 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159196239628 0.150856017488 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0898583455167 0.0645574589148 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 31.8 11.7677419355 270% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 12.61 58.1214874552 22% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 6.10430107527 239% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 25.9 10.1575268817 255% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.25 10.9000537634 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.57 8.01818996416 132% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 26.5 10.002688172 265% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 25.2 10.0537634409 251% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 26.0 10.247311828 254% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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