With the huge expansion of the world population. Transportation became one of the most concerning issues around the globe. Some people argue that in the next twenty years, the world will witness a considerable decline in a number of cars. Personally, I disagree with this for the following reasons.
To begin with, while there are myriad ways of transportation, cars remain the most comfortable method for most of the people. Private cars enable the person to manage his time as he wants. Moreover, even with raised taxes and awareness of the pollution issues, most of the population still opt to use their own cars for the seek of their convenience. As a result, the car industry became more expanded, and the number of the cars that produced by these companies is enhanced to a noticeable level. All these factors make the opportunity to cut down on the cars' number in the next years an extremely hard to believe. For instance, a friend of mine who works in vehicles factory told me that their profits have been raised about fifty percent more than the previous year, due to the fact that the number of the customers have increased to a great level and it continues to rise.
Furthermore, the other methods of transportation like bus, metro, and trains are less convenient, because they have a strict time schedule. Besides, most of them are not available at late night despite their availability during the day. For example, when I was studying at the University of Khartoum, I was living out of the campus, so, when I had late classes, it was really difficult for me to find a bus. Thus, most of the time I had no choice other than hiring a taxi which was really expensive. Consequently, I decided to buy a car which I think was one of the best decision I ever made. And actually, most of my friends thought similarly. Accordingly, if the people look for their comfort, the number of them who use the cars will, indeed, elevated rather than decreasing.
Finally, people who think that the usage of the cars will go down in the net years depend on the idea that cars are one the major source of air pollution, and they contribute to the global warming issue. However, this point is not a problem anymore. Due to the fact that the recent invention of the eco cars will have a positive impact on the environment since they depend on the electricity. A lot of companies, nowadays, produce these kinds of cars. So, one can expect that the great competition between these companies will bring down the price of these cars. And as a result, it will be affordable for the majority of the citizen. For instance, countries like Australia registered an accelerated percentage of eco car use among the population and this percentage is expected to rise in the future years.
In conclusion, in contrary to what some nation think; the world will witness an incredible growth in the number of the people who depend on their cars as a principal way of transportation. This is attributed to the fact that most of the people, nowadays, prefer to ride their own cars.
- TPO-10 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Playing computer games is a waste of time. Children should not be allowed to play them.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 70
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- TPO-16 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The best way to travel is in a group led by a tour guide. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 70
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, actually, besides, but, consequently, finally, furthermore, however, if, look, moreover, really, similarly, so, still, thus, while, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 81.0 52.1666666667 155% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2527.0 1977.66487455 128% => OK
No of words: 538.0 407.700716846 132% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6970260223 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.81610080973 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6873807531 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 262.0 212.727598566 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.486988847584 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 797.4 618.680645161 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.1221797024 48.9658058833 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.1923076923 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6923076923 20.6045352989 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.53846153846 5.45110844103 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129714224275 0.236089414692 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0382131467332 0.076458572812 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0336176516744 0.0737576698707 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0764102998671 0.150856017488 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0295127872371 0.0645574589148 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 11.7677419355 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.98 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 86.8835125448 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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